No Comparison
And if i said
that the breeze
lilting and chill
brought more evening peace
even than the quiet pools
of your orange-rimmed irised eyes
that the wasp buzz
near silver rim cider
hummed cool fermentation
of celebration more joyous
even than shower songs
wet and resonant
on love struck Sunday
that legatto triads
of birdsong
chippered away
at melancholy day
more even than framed photos
of laughing children torso-bare
flower petals underfoot
And If I felt that warm-breathed panting
of cool nosed canines
kissed sweeter than lipsticked lips
that spotlit halved moon
hung more beautiful
than silver silhouetted
lace ensconced breast pendant
that green grass edge tickled
lighter than feathered fingertips
would you still dance
the days of your life
next to me knowing
that my words and feelings
would make us forever late
for the gatherings of souls
or would you quietly look
at my eyes downcast
lips edge tightening
knowing I was
about to laugh
at my own lies.
Mae Foreman
Wed 18th Sep 2019 23:25
Oh deep deep stuff. Very good! At last some of that instead of the usual love-related poems. You opened the door to the truth. Excellent ?
Mae