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I thought I’d met a man

Who saw the real me.

He held a buttercup beneath my chin.

 

He said “My God!

You don’t like butter!

I’ve never heard of that before!

You are a living miracle!

For every maiden’s chin blushes with gold

When beneath her face

A lovely buttercup I hold”

 

I was impressed for he was right.

I don’t like butter.

Butter makes me sick.

And this man knew,

He could really see,

He’d got right to the inner heart of me!

 

But then I found,

Another heartbreak later,

That he was only teasing me

about my pale white chin.

That he was lying,

I was just like all the rest.

He never saw the real me at all.

And he was only joking when he said

That he loved me the best.

 

 

photo carolineskywalker

 

 

 

 

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 22nd Mar 2010 12:54

This is so good, Ann, touching and embracing us all.

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Isobel

Sun 21st Mar 2010 08:51

I like this one Ann. You use a simple little childhood trick to weave such a tale. It catches you cos deep down I guess we all want to think we are special. To find out you aren't - just another bod - can be the most hurtful thing of all.

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