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Universe

Everything moves to a rhythm,

conducted by the universe.

The universe is a bass drum,

Pulsating, a song with one verse.

 

(Let me know what you think.)

New poem, let me know your thoughts. It's called "Venus in Transit". ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (4281)

Wed 20th Feb 2008 20:49

HI, Paul
I like the stanza. The content is very rich. It asks for more...It will be a great to read more of your writings.

Thank you for sharing...Zuzanna

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