The Visit
and then there was the room
and it was bare
and the bulb was bare that lit it
and in the corner the man was bare
his back was turned
and he sat
and he held his arms over his head
crossed in front of his face
and you could tell he had sat there
for a while as you breathed
that scent of stillness
that nothing had changed
that time was empty
like a calendar without numbers or days
or phases of the moon
just empty squares
like the room
bare
and there was a taste of metal
like in the dead of winter
so long before your tongue
had touched another's
but had dryly extended
that lover of language
and pressed against the cold steel
of a high chain link fence
and you wondered if that icy gray adhesion
would forever numb flavors
more subtle than that salty
woolen taste that came from crying
for mitten mouth comfort
and the room was bare
and the man sat
and there was a taste of metal
and the man was crying
silently
but there was a rhythm to the fall and rise
of his bare arms
while his long dirty-nailed fingers
held the top of his head
like the blessing of a father
but because he was alone
and they were his hands
it was less blessing than protection
as he appeared to cower from blows
which came from dark imaginings
as the room was empty and bare
and the man sat and there
was a taste of metal
and the man was crying
and there was a window high and barred
with smoke-gray sky
and just enough light to cast
a long dim shadow of the man
onto the far wall
and because he sat naked
with arms crossed
hands on head
silently sobbing
his shadow was a wounded bird
tempest ravaged
flockless and unfeathered
blown off course
through the high bars
of the bare room
to mimic and mirror
the irrhythmic despair
of the man who sat bare
all alone there
for you had gone
without speaking
heartbroken by all
that could not be said.
Mae Foreman
Mon 21st Oct 2019 07:54
Adam that's extraordinary! I love it! Each of your poems is better than the one before! Excellent! I love it when I don't understand what I've written, it means the piece has a life of its own. Kudos!?
Mae