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The domestic critique'

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Your home grown words of babble are no match for this real, reality. They are but clawed, gnarled carvings of your immediate scrolled banality.
Metrical schemes, un-synchronised  with punk'ed, punctuation, frozen stanza's, deconstructed, into emotional  isolation. 
Median 
The means and themes  are a shackled, shackles show, a chaotic sentence of structured syllables, a critiqued wheeze, howled and meek, of which no prose or poetry will grow. Just an unfelt ink scream, scattered  on to the  empty page.
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I could go on, but its knowing when to stop.

 

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Philip Stevens

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 19:40

Thank you for reading ?

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afishamongmany

Sun 20th Oct 2019 18:53

Yea! Too true Blue. ? Go well, tell, tell.

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