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The African Queen

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I am listening

very closely to you,

just as the Buddhists would

recommend,

keeping attention

on your voice, 

how it sounds,

and the content of your words,

trying my best to

ignore my thoughts

that keep rudely interrupting,

how your hair

pinned like that

resembles Katharine Hepburn

in The African Queen

which is based upon 

a 1935 book by

C.S. Forester

which I wonder if you knew

or would be impressed to know

that I know,

but I don't mention,

as it has nothing

to do with your new job.

Instead I return to

your voice,

each word

leaving the harbour

of your mouth 

a little ship

delivering the good news,

down the dark 

meandering currents

of my primitive attention.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Wed 20th Nov 2019 05:21

Good one Tom. Love that last stanza❣️

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raypool

Tue 19th Nov 2019 13:27

Beautifully understated and meandering listlessly along taking our thoughts for the ride Tom. We are privileged to be privy to what youre wanting to impart and it almost strays into fantasy. A poetic journey with a strong image towards the end.

Ray

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