Even the olives are bleeding
(dedicated to the everlasting memory of Harry O'Neill: Au revoir comrade)
an old olive oil press rusting
at the bottom of a sandy garden
in this occupied territory;
children lying prostrate,
bleeding into the soil;
a man
murmuring.
about a weight, a burden, something.....
lifted.
We disciples could not hear clearly,
what with all the muffled explosions
and such, all around Gethsemane.
This man, this man, he screamed out:
‘NOT AS I WILL, BUT AS YOU WILL FATHER!’.
but there was no other man there, no father, nothing.
Was this man drunk?
I do not think so.
But he may have drunk some wine
sometime..
Now there's
a pause in the battle,
I hear the cock crow
three times:
faraway, strange, sunset, not sunrise.
but all the roosters had been eaten, long ago
what with the siege and the starvation and whatnot.
I don't know....
raypool
Wed 20th Nov 2019 17:17
Extremely effective John. Authentic and harrowing and jars the spirit - a sort of nether world between life and death portrayed so well.
Ray