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THOSE GHOSTS

THOSE GHOSTS

 

You can't seal up death

despite the rituals,

it abides in tobacco 

pouches and old armchairs

and abandoned shoes

worn once to tread

the winding alleys 

of this town.

 

In sleek black cars

and creaking wardrobes

with their mothball smells,

in distant excursions

recalled on paper scraps

that fall by chance

from picture frames.

 

You can't bury the past

its ghosts haunt

the edges of today,

persist in shadows

that linger a moment

too long when you drift

into that room with

your thoughts elsewhere.

 

The Cabinet of Heed, issue 26. The Chief Polisher - Simon Webster.

 

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 24th Nov 2019 01:41

Love this one John, especially the last stanza. We are often told to let the past go, but you have captured perfectly how that is easier said than done. ?

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john short

Sat 23rd Nov 2019 23:22

Wow! Glad you enjoyed the poem. Never occurred to me that the site needs redeeming. The best thing in my opinion is that it empowers people. Especially poets who are just starting out. They can express themselves and get responses to their work. I only discovered Poesis Novae Litterature through this site. A fledgling ezine that has quickly gone from strength to strength. I try to encourage people to submit their work because a poet who never submits is like a boxer who trains in the gym but never has any matches. It definitely improves your poetry but then again, people have different literary intentions.

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raypool

Sat 23rd Nov 2019 12:14

Hi John . Smells in particular always feel very personal and seems do poignant in bringing back memories. Ghosts like smells are insubstantial . I like the framework of the poem and the way the last verse makes a strong case.
I think your work redeems the site at the.moment.

Rsy

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