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Give me the peace of the lonely woods,

Give the hush of a gentle breeze,

Give me relief, relief would good,

Relieve me of the assault on my ears,

Let me use my mouth only for breath,

Let me still the noise in my head,

Let the land around be quiet as death,

Without the need to be dead,

In short let each person from north to south,

Rebalance their verbal distortion,

Let them see we have two ears and only one mouth,

And should use them in just that proportion.

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kJ Walker

Sun 1st Dec 2019 08:12

Nice one. Last two lines finished it off nicely.

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Jason Bayliss

Sat 30th Nov 2019 13:06

Oh I love the, "Two ears, one mouth," ethos. It's genuinely a good rule to live by.

J. x

Do.RoThy

Wed 27th Nov 2019 22:04

If followed can change the world...for the change begins within first...well written!!

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afishamongmany

Wed 27th Nov 2019 21:18

Hi Jason - A good read. 'nuff said : ) ><>

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