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Famously Comparing.

He calls me Audrey in the mornings.

Says that he can buy me breakfast at Tiffany's

Just not the earrings-

That he'd dance like Fred Estaire with me always.

As for me, what do I think?

I think you look a lot like Bob Dylan,

Circa 1961.

So Lay Me Down. ►

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Ray Miller

Mon 12th Apr 2010 12:42

Something very endearing about this, even though you've spelt Astaire wrong! It feels as if you should be saying "he looks a lot like Bob Dylan" but maybe not.

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Andy N

Mon 12th Apr 2010 08:19

nice one georgina here... the ending is a lot softer than i originally expected but nice one!

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