Hey Andy. Pardon my ignorance but do you mean to tell me your real name is David Robilliard? If so, i have a question for you but not here. It's concerning my other work.
Thanks for all your comments by the way.
Love Janet.x

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yeah u made it sound like u liked my poem...

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Two or three reads of my stuff Andy and yer hooked....ya old poem junkie!
See ya soon wid da pasties!
Gus

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Perfect Place.

Like this, Andy. I particularly like -

'I want to listen
To the cars parking
In the distance.'

It's an odd image, but a really engaging one. I think this might be my favourite poem of yours. It feels very focused.

Good one, Andy.

Steve

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thank you for the tip andy
i like your poems they make
you think and see whats happening
they are really great cnt wait to read more
from you - Hollie

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Hi Andy
Thanks for your obs on 3 Stones
Gus

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Hi Andy RE - Pictures on Window Screens. This poem says what I have been thinking on and off for a long time but with a difference. I often wonder at thi little things in life. the ants, the tiny flowers, the lichens. get close and they are amamzing (sorry , gettling all sloppy here) then bosh a dirty great big boot destroys all that perfection in an instant without a care and without insight. In your poem the difference is the beauty is also man made as well as the destruction (the wiping away) It captures that b..b..b..but instant before thewipe nicely as that info is only contained in the last two lines.
Another point - Isn't a window screen a mesh screen that keeps out flies and a windscreen the glass in a car? might want to consider this or tell me I have it all wrong. Winston

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Hi Andy

thank you for taking the time to read my poem Nothing to Say

i have changed a couple of words since i wrote it and feel that the piece now has a more balanced and complete feel about it

thanks again

steve

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Happy new year Andy,
thanks for your recent comment on my poem,
"Nobody ever visits any more."
Janet.x

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Wow I love the valentine one it's wonderful!

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Thanks Andy
Hope 2009 is a good one for you

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Thank-you!
Cx

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Thanks for reading Andy... nothing that mush different ... but what do I know..... get another drink into ya....
see ya soon
Gus

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thanks for taking the time to read my work it means a lot and I welcome criticism - well to be honest it's for both and with each poem I adopt a different tone - relevant to the subject to bring it to life.

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Happy Christmas to you too.
Cx

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Hi Andy. In your poem Prefect Place, liked your section -
I want to listen
To the cars parking
In the distance.
for some reason has a lovely vagueness for me
Winston

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Bit of a dearth of events in my area - also seems everyone has stopped rhyming for Christmas!
Cx

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Thank-you! Probably won't get round to reading it aloud - sadly live quite a way from the Manchester area, and also am very nervous about performing my own stuff! - If anybody wants to give it a go for me though - I'd be delighted! - would love to know how it's received. On Pete Crompton's advice I've gone and got a mic - and just as soon as I figure out how the thing works, I'll maybe voice up a piece or two -it's a start!
Thanks again,
Cx

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Incidentally - I really like your work - Perfect Place & Snow Ghost in particular. Unfinished Masterpiece reminds me of someone in my past - and When I Paint My Masterpiece oddly enough ... !
Cx

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Hi
Thanks for getting back to me ... erm... can't quite remember ....probably SNAFU - it took me a lot to work up courage to post that so comments mean a lot. Thank-you!
Btw - is it generally obvious what SNAFU stands for?
Cx

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Thanks so much for your comment. These mean such a lot to me. It took me longer to work up the courage to post it. Can I please ask a favour? .... I, very stupidly, pressed the 'Remove comment' button when I meant to click on your name to add this comment .... could you please...if it's not too much to ask.. add the comment again? I don't think there is a way to get them back .... :-)
Ta.
Cx

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Thanks Andy

You,re right ...its the opening of a book I'm writing about my formative years.....
Thanks again Gus

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thanx for the comment hun
this ''boundery'' im on about -
is quite...how can i say....
- a shit hole lol


i know ive said it before
but perfect place is a really sweet poem
you seem a lovely gentleman

sez x

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Thanks Andy. Just trying to be a bit more versitile! Not sure re performing it, I'm far more comfortable doing nob poems as a charactor.

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Hey Andy,
Thanks for your message. Yes, I do plan on putting a few more poems up at some point.
I enjoyed your poem 'Pictures on Windscreens'. I liked the simplicity of it and the fact that the final line was rather telling of your brother's character.
Have a good one!

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Hey Andy,
thanks for your comment on suffragette writer.
How do you know it comes across lovely live?
Were you hiding in a corner somewhere at the Tudor last thursday night?
Or could it be you imagined how my voice sounds while you read it?
See you soon, hopefully.
love Janet.xx

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hi Andy, thanks for your comments on my poems.
I really liked your perfect place. Very gentle and touching

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Dear Andy

Thannk you for your comments reagrding my short piece of prose. It is much appreciated.

I like your piece 'perfect place' it reminded me of my own style of writing, very simple, but true.

Konbanwa Belinda desu

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Im glad yyou could appreciate the dyslexia poem, I was conviinced I was, had the tets done but I'm not according to the psychologis! Thanks for taking the time out to comment. Ric

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hiya andy

thanks for the comment
im glad you enjoyed my poem

i like your poem 'perfect place'
it is such a beutiful poem

sez x

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Hi Andy, just want to say thanks for your comment on my blog, neptune meets venus.
I've read your samples and i like snow ghost, valentine and the windscreen one.
I meant to comment on " i remember" but can't remember if i did or not. ha ha.
Janet.x

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Cheers Andy thanks for comment, bet this 'Fun' thing was fun! Hope to get to next freed up thing. To be honest I've been quite lucky at the fests I've been to weather wise, but yes you go with expectation to wear out any clobber for good! cheer Jeff

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