It's you again!
just realised you'd also commented on 'Roadie'- written from the perspective of both being and relying upon in my time. Roadies are most certainly an interesting rock phenomenon - vastly undervalued and yet - so stupid! :-)
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thanks for your kmind comments on 'children of the glamned' Daniel - apologies in my late reply - I was away on holiday when you added the comment and then came home to be hit with a bout of food poisoning - so only just starting to catch up.
Yes - I was a teenager in the glam rock era - so written very much from the heart. Had a look at your profile page and other poems - we seem to be coming from a very similar place with our writing don't you think? really enjoyed having a rummage through your stuff - you seem to be a very strong and prolific talent - good 'un mate
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Daniel, your kind comments brought me to your work. Good to see another rhyming poet. I really like The Place Where Only Dead Men Sleep. I think you caught the mood and the atmosphere well. Like the contrast between the Corporal and the Sergeant. Am going on to read more of yur work. Glad you came out tot the closet.
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By a strange coincidence one of my daughters has a few months left on a work placement in Bristol, so you never know I might well check it out! I've a vague idea of doing one of my jazz vignettes on Charlie Mingus. These little poems are like my version of finger exercises or practising my scales. They're quite fun to do and not too stressful. They are all approximately 70 syllables long, so you just need one insight or angle to do one. I did a similar set on cities I'd visited throughout my life and ended up with two dozen, then thought enough was enough!
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Hi Daniel Thanks for the encouragement! I am not as active as I used to be on WOL and mainly use it if I want to post a poem and a picture on my FB page. I'll catch up with yours when I can give them proper attention. If you want to link up on FB search www.facebook.com/davidcookepoet. Although that sounds a bit precious I had to do it that way as 'David Cooke's' are two a penny on FB! |Glad to make the acquaintance of musical poetry fan!
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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes
Sun 22nd Jun 2014 11:13
Hi Daniel
Many thanks for your encouraging remarks.
And yes I'm doing what you suggest at the Ring'O'bells Middleton tonight Sunday 22nd.
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Hi Daniel
Thanks for your comments on 'I want more',thats really encouraging. I really like 'The place where only dead men sleep' It has a real sense for me of what it must have been like. I can almost hear somebody singing 'it's a long way to tipperary'.
I can also relate to your comments in your profile about coming out as a wordsmith 'ready or not'
keep on keeping on.
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LOVED the Place Where Only Dead Men Sleep. Excellent poem.
My paternal grandfather was at "Wipers" with the Manchester Regiment so I felt a connection with the poem straight away.
I particularly like the Corporal/Wipers, Sergeant Major/Ypres repetition.
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Hello Daniel - thanks for your comments on "Bowden
Hill". As the song goes: "Ah yes...I remember it well." I have many happy memories of those
distant Wiltshire schooldays and I understand
that Bowden Hill is one of the recognised "hill
climbs" in today's competitive cycling world.
Having read your poem "The Place Where Only Dead Men sleep", I can appreciate your affinity with
"The Menin Gate".
Lest we forget!
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thanx Daniel and big welcome to the site Love your style :)
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Hello Daniel, welcome to Write Out Loud. Thank you so much for your kind words on 'Sleep'. Much appreciated. Look forward to reading more of your work.
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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes
Wed 4th Jun 2014 11:33
Hi Daniel
Thanks for the kind comment.
After reading your splendidly well constructed excellently rhymed work, I sincerely return the compliment.
Are these pieces based on episodes of past experience? First World war work apart.
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Hello Daniel
Welcome to Write Out Loud.
I hope you enjoy the site. We're really looking forward to reading some of your work and I know that you will be warmly welcomed by other WOL-ers too.
Thanks for uploading a picture of yourself, it’s good to see what our fellow poets look like.
Have a good browse around, there’s lots going on and if you have the time to make some comments about the work of other poets please feel free. It’s the best way to get some constructive feedback about your own work too.
There’s always someone who’ll help you out with a problem, so just ask and someone will get back to you. It’s a friendly place, so welcome once again.
Graham Sherwood
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Ian Whiteley
Fri 27th Jun 2014 14:50
cheers - thanks so much for the kind comments Daniel. I'm hoping the CD will be finished and released by 11/11/14 - fingers crossed :-)
in the meantime - don't know if you're interested, but I have a CD and EP available for purchase (or you can just listen to the tracks for free) on Bandcamp - here: http://thecrowsofalbion.bandcamp.com/
thanks for showing an interest - much appreciated mate
Ian
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