<Deleted User> (13740)
Sat 26th Dec 2020 07:54
Merry Christmas and thanks for dropping by and the messages your poetry is beautiful, just like you, lovely lady x
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Tue 22nd Dec 2020 04:16
great response!
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Mon 21st Dec 2020 02:09
Where there are squirrels
there are nuts & seeds,
Squirrels drive you nuts
most would agree,
They invade your attic
your property
soon squirreled away
they never leave!
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Sun 20th Dec 2020 01:14
Viva Aviva!
(also a paper towel)
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Fri 18th Dec 2020 03:28
If calories are your concern
then do not overeat
it's best to have a poem instead
their norishment can't be beat,
and while a steady diet of
may leave you feeling draineed
a daily poem is never a loss
and always yours to gain.
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Wed 9th Dec 2020 20:44
loved your response
although it was not a response
but apropos for the poem
that had No subject.
Viva Aviva!
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<Deleted User> (14241)
Mon 7th Dec 2020 05:26
Thanks for the feedback! Your thoughts on the poem make it better than I could have ever intended.?
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<Deleted User> (28781)
Sat 5th Dec 2020 04:51
Thank you for your suggestion. I honestly write to get things off me. This blog kinda diary. I've made the necessary change. Thank you for reading.
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Thank you for your comment! And gosh no lol, I wrote that piece a while ago!
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d.knape
Mon 28th Dec 2020 17:36
that's me all right.
signed,
Troublesome Lump
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