Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

Profile image

John F Keane

Tue 14th Oct 2014 07:17

Two FREE creative writing workshops with Margaret Holbrook on Saturday 1st November and Saturday 22nd November between 2 and 4 PM.

email

john@screenstockport.co.uk

to confirm your place.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Andy N

Thu 25th Sep 2014 12:55

missed that in the pm i sent the other day, but thanks Nigel for posting her email address.

I have actually just wrote Boat Story II (which i will read out next month) so will get all three of my poetry over to her asap

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Mon 22nd Sep 2014 14:37

Good idea John

caroline.riley@healthywaterwaystrust.org.uk

just put Stockport W O L River Mersey

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

John F Keane

Sat 20th Sep 2014 08:49

Nigel

Might be an idea if you posted her email address on here.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Tue 16th Sep 2014 11:26

Carloline Riley has sent me an e-mail saying how much she enjoyed last week.

She also said anyone in the group who wants her to use their poem can e-mail it to her.

I have asked for details of the website our poems might go on.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

John F Keane

Fri 5th Sep 2014 17:10

Tremendous!

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Fri 5th Sep 2014 16:30

Just got word Caroline is coming down on Monday night!

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Fri 5th Sep 2014 15:26

I have been in touch with Caroline Riley from the Healthy Waterways Trust to see if she can come down on Monday.

I am still waiting for a reply to see if she can make it.

Putting a poem together about the theme for the night Rivers called The False Claim.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

John F Keane

Tue 26th Aug 2014 18:16

Liverpool gained a great deal of its wealth from those two trades in the 18th century, especially the slave trade:

http://www.liverpoolmuseums.org.uk/ism/slavery/europe/liverpool.aspx

"It would be wrong to attribute all of Liverpool's success to the slave trade, but it was undoubtedly the backbone of the town's prosperity. Historian, David Richardson suggests that slaving and related trades may have occupied a third and possibly a half of Liverpool's shipping activity in the period 1750 to 1807."

As a city, Manchester does not really have the same taint.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Tue 26th Aug 2014 14:01

I like your poem John called Artery
on the second line you talk of the slave trade
then again later in tea and men.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Thu 7th Aug 2014 15:52

A joy to see

Now we want
All members to
Come next Monday
The theme being
Job number one
Mine was easy
Making tea for
My dear Mother
Too sweet or
Too strong then
Early to bed
Hit the sack
Instead of getting
If you know
What I mean!

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Andy N

Sat 26th Jul 2014 12:16

Here are my 9 little poems for Heatons Twaiku

May do some more 2moro but here are some to get you going

http://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=43470

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

John F Keane

Sat 26th Jul 2014 10:48

Remember that the Heatons Arts Trail is running this weekend. If you want to tweet a poem celebrating the works, remember to include @heatonstwaiku in the header. My account will be notified and I will retweet your poem to followers of the heatonstwaiku account.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Fri 25th Jul 2014 15:26

I hope the weather holds for the Heaton Moor Arts Trail this weekend!

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Tue 15th Jul 2014 11:56

Thanks for telling everyone know about the Heaton Arts Trail John.Maggie you missed a good night it was pure gold!Cheers for the mini poetry Andy N and good luck with the play.Doing a short poem about my first job calling it Play Safe!

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

John F Keane

Mon 14th Jul 2014 18:04

Grit is it;
it is grit.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

dorinda macdowell

Wed 9th Jul 2014 13:28

Woops! - found the theme; it's "grit"...
OK OK I shall go away and stop causing trouble....
Dorinda
x

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

dorinda macdowell

Wed 9th Jul 2014 07:40

Hello there! - I thought I'd sent a message yesterday, but I cannot see it here, so I'm re-sending! Just got back from two lovely weeks in France, and I cannot find what the theme is for our next meeting (that has nothing whatsoever to do with the vin rouge!!!) - so if someone could let me know, I'd be grateful.....
Thanks, and see you next week - Dorinda x

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Andy N

Fri 13th Jun 2014 12:43

really enjoyed last monday guys. really made me smile. the really short poems suited everybody.

already looking forward to july's.

see you all soon.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Thu 5th Jun 2014 15:07

Hi Andy N

It will be good to see you

The theme for the night is willpower

When craving starts
Try to resist
Send strong messages
To your brain.

I must not
I must not
I must not
I must not.

In the end
Temptation wins battle
Willpower looses control
Feeling guilty maybe.

But even if
Strict diet dies
That chocolate bar
Tastes so divine.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Andy N

Thu 5th Jun 2014 12:53

see you all on Monday as will defo be there unless something goes wrong in the meantime.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

dorinda macdowell

Thu 6th Mar 2014 09:03

Julian, the format for WOL main site is back to normal now! - thank you!

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Linda Cosgriff

Fri 7th Feb 2014 22:18

And thanks from me because I want to enter it, too!

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

dorinda macdowell

Mon 3rd Feb 2014 07:16

John, thank you - it worked! - Dorinda

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

John F Keane

Sun 2nd Feb 2014 00:44

Dorinda

There is no submission form. You need to pay the submission fee via the competition's Paypal account and email your poems to the email address given. You will probably need to create a Paypal account.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

dorinda macdowell

Fri 31st Jan 2014 14:18

Hello everyone! - I could do with some help, please! - tried to enter the Women's Anthology comp entitled "Furies" (shown on Write Out Loud site), but all I could find was the bit for payment - could not find a submissions form! I was quite disappointed as I had tailored two entries specifically for this comp! If any of you 'hi-tech guys' can help, I'd be very grateful!
Yours in puzzlement........Dorinda x
ps: do be patient with me: I will be 70 this year - senility gallops on at an alarming rate!
D x

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Wed 15th Jan 2014 13:21

Collage Mixture

Red nostrils
energetic blow.

Winter blue
leaves nature.

Sunset mountains
birdsong written.

Summer kisses
troubled dreams.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Andy N

Fri 27th Dec 2013 11:15

hope you all had a good christmas. sorry for the quietness. had a lot on really but my schedule is a lot more manageable now so should be able to start coming down more in the new year.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

dorinda macdowell

Tue 24th Dec 2013 11:05

Amen!
Dorinda
x

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Thu 19th Dec 2013 15:30

I would just like to wish everyone a very merry Christmas and I am looking forward to the first get together in 2014.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

dorinda macdowell

Mon 16th Dec 2013 08:08

Hello Stockport WOL! - I've just seen info about an award - "Unsung Hero" - and Julian is one of the people nominated. I'll be voting for him of course! - just thought I'd mention this! Dorinda x

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Thu 12th Dec 2013 16:31

Conflict

Laugh at your enemy
while he questions why
strike hard at vulnerability
defence lines opened up.

Forceful intent follows through
pretence no longer needed
the sword of laughter
shines steel of red.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Thu 5th Dec 2013 16:21

T o s e n s e t h e u n k n o w n m a k e s
m y s e a r c h f o r i t e v e n b e t t e r.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Thu 21st Nov 2013 16:12

Words to picture
Sentence to scene
Seasons to create
Art of make-believe.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

John F Keane

Tue 19th Nov 2013 16:06

Nigel, the Arts Trail books have arrived. And look magnificent!

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Fri 15th Nov 2013 16:33

Maggie I like your toast to the Queen of royal blue!

Dreadlock and John seem to share the same view
myself included.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Maggie Waker

Thu 14th Nov 2013 20:04

I have found the group on these pages again! and I have also made a comment on the Home page about Poetry Invite to the Palace. Thanks for everyone who helped me find my way back.
Maggie

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

John F Keane

Mon 11th Nov 2013 22:44

Cannery Row is a fantastic book. Although it is an 'old' book, it feels completely modern in its style and attitude.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

dorinda macdowell

Mon 11th Nov 2013 21:33

Great meeting this evening!
As promised, the books I have of John Steinbeck are:
The Grapes of Wrath
East of Eden
The Wayward Bus
The Red Pony
The Long Valley
Tortilla Flat
Cannery Row
Sweet Thursday
The Pearl
Travels with Charley...

D. x

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Thu 7th Nov 2013 16:24

I like the sequel D

On the road
the leader decides
to reduce speed
but the followers
also slow down
they all think
must be a
speed camera ahead!

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

dorinda macdowell

Wed 6th Nov 2013 07:09

Hi Nigel: "The Road" - a sequel - - -

You did
Said the marchers
'Cause you're first

Said he
It's a curse
Being first
I will walk behind thee
Therefore my walk will be
Quite indescribably
More relaxed, leisurely...

(with apologies from me, D)!...

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Thu 17th Oct 2013 15:29

Thanks for that Dorinda

The only thing we missed was the collage poem
maybe next time.

Like the photo Maggie and you got a mention well done.

The Road

On a road
no signs seen
following the person
marching in front.

We ask him
wait a minute
are we going
the right way?

He turns around
saying to us
who of you
made me leader?








Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

dorinda macdowell

Tue 15th Oct 2013 10:00

Hi Maggie, John and Nigel

A palindrome is "a word or phrase that reads the same backwards as forwards, eg: madam".

William Ross Wallace 1819 - 1881 (Wallace was my Mum's maiden name so maybe I have some sort of illustrious ancestor?!) wrote "The Hand That Rocks The Cradle Rules The World". I've just printed it off as it really is rather beautiful (and John, it rhymes!!!)

Last of all, Maggie, were you thinking of Slim Whitman (Country and Western singer - late 50's), as opposed to Walt Whitman (marvellous poet?) Slim Whitman's name popped into my head yestersday evening when I got home!

Enough! - great meeting last night - and see you next time!

Have a good month.........Dorinda

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

dorinda macdowell

Tue 15th Oct 2013 10:00

Hi Maggie, John and Nigel

A palindrome is "a word or phrase that reads the same backwards as forwards, eg: madam".

William Ross Wallace 1819 - 1881 (Wallace was my Mum's maiden name so maybe I have some sort of illustrious ancestor?!) wrote "The Hand That Rocks The Cradle Rules The World". I've just printed it off as it really is rather beautiful (and John, it rhymes!!!)

Last of all, Maggie, were you thinking of Slim Whitman (Country and Western singer - late 50's), as opposed to Walt Whitman (marvellous poet?) Slim Whitman's name popped into my head yestersday evening when I got home!

Enough! - great meeting last night - and see you next time!

Have a good month.........Dorinda

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Mon 14th Oct 2013 11:34

You will be missed

Good luck on the Spoken Word Show

If they are all like this you will go down well!

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Meshach R Brencher

Mon 14th Oct 2013 10:45

I should be able to attend next months WOL but if you get time, you could share those poems in tonight's session.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Meshach R Brencher

Mon 14th Oct 2013 10:43

Hi everyone, I wasn't able to attend last week and won't be able to attend tonight's WOL because of work and handball commitments. However, I have still been writing and preparing some stuff for a spoken word show next month. Here's a couple of pieces I'm been working on.

Mirror Distortion:

one time in drama class
I picked up a glass mirror
but it dropped on the floor
what a smashing performance
it was for me
my teacher thought it was groundbreaking
even though
the mirror appeared to be distorted
I soon realised
I was looking at it cross-eyed
how stupid am I
not to realise seeing two mirrors
in front of me
I only held one hand out for one
that's why the other one smashed
but fear not
this problem can be fixed
the broken pieces can be build up again
or used for a better means
what nice chandeliers
they'd make in the drama room
to make acts look more eloquent
Picture that. What a nice reflection
that would leave.

This next one is a palindrome style poem:

He said he did it
He didn’t
He did differently
He wonders beyond imagination
Floating ozone
Twisting hair
Volatile smoke, silver haze
Puffy clouds go coast to coast
Chicken burnt
Lingering numbness
Mind dumbing
What agenda
Answer question
Question marks
Stubborn nature
Flashing lights, switch off
Accept you if it is done
Done is it if you accept?
Off switch, lights flashing
Nature stubborn
Marks questioned
Question answered
Agenda what?
Dumbing mind
Numbness lingering
Burnt chicken
Coast to coast go clouds puffy
Haze silver, smoke volatile
Hair twisting
Ozone floating
Imagination beyond wonders
He Differently did he
Didn’t he it?
did he said he?!?!

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Thu 26th Sep 2013 15:46

Thanks for the books A Harvest of Art John

Are you taking Christmas bookings yet for the next one?

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Thu 5th Sep 2013 15:36

Art on art
hold that page
instant news breaking
read published tweets.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

More Comments

◄ Prev123456Next ►

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message