Hi Jeff,
just want to say it was lovely to see you again last night and as usual you did a great job as compere. You always make everyone feel welcome and appreciated for their efforts, and i especially appreciate that, being a woman who walks in alone looking around for a friendly face.

I like your lighthouse poem by the way. It reminds me a little of how i feel sometimes.
Janet.x

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Thanks Jeff for reading and commenting Re Chaque Femme Est Belle.. By the way I pleased to see you are now, poetically speaking of course, a new and shining beacont in the darkness. Mind you I think Bolton needs more help than a Lighthouse...
See you soon
Gus

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Wey Hey, Well done on coming 4th in the slam.. proud of you babe. xxxx

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well done on coming runner up in the bolton poetry slam! I want to enter a slam one day I hope I will guts someday and will get over my monotone voice!

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"It's like your first gig on the front row
It's like your first girl on the back row..."

Ah yes, Jeff. Now that's what I call poetry!

Fucking superb.

Steve

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Thanks for your comments on my poems. Coltrane was a jazz saxophonist of endless invention.

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Hi Jeff

Thanks for your comment about Different Dad. Also thanks for putting on a great night at Bolton. Myself and Maggie had a really good time and I see that you are planning another already for May so well done.

Cheers
Seamus

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Thanks for a great night at Bolton.
Sorry I didnt do the full 15 minutes, but I dont think any more than 15 is good for any poet, no matter who or what unless they are very adaptable, im getting there but have a lot to learn yet., you def have to break it up, people just get bored, no matter ...I didnt wanna do that 4 you Jeff. It was great night! I Love your delivery style its good and kinda punky! (whatever that means!)

keep going and heres for another Jeff night please.

Pete

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Hi Jeff, Good to see you at the Green Room last night and thanks for reading the bus stop thing today. I have tickets for an event next fri evening in Huddersfield so sadly wont be able to come to the gig, sounds good though. Hope it goes well. Win x

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Hi Jeff, Thank you for your feedback :) i'm good thank you, and will take a look at some of your stuff :)

Ta very much again Belinda

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Thanks For the read re 'Olaf'...just a bit of excercise for the rhyme fairy really nothing serious....mind you thats my middle name...'nothing serious'..I was pleased to do Fat Elvis ...glad you liked it

See ya soon
Gus

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Thanks to you Jeff for your comments
your a star!

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Hey mate,
thanks for your recent comments. It took me ages finding out which ones you'd posted a comment though.
Trust you're ok and hope to see you soon but no promises.
Love Janet.x

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Thanks for thecomments re 3 Stones and Jack and Jill... got to start taking more water with it... See you soon!
Once again many thanks.
Gus

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Hey Jeff, thank you for your comments on 'words'. I really appreciate it of course! I just read and laughed at 'Appointment with Fear'. Especially at the end when it was apparent all the torment and fear was only the check-up. Like the picture too. Ally :o)

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Hi Jeff, thank you for your kind comments on my poems.It does sometimes feel like my wee worlds will come crashing down but they're tougher than I think..ice and glass.
Sorry to have missed the last WOL cos was snowed up int' Dales,did you get? Deb

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Hi Jeff,

Good to see I caught your eye whilst you were catching up. Glad you enjoyed it.

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I am happy that there are people like you in the world, you always make an effort and have time for people Jeff, you should be proud of that, a good soul you have and the eye for the poems, I hope that your dedication and kindness brings love and light to you

thank you for all your encouragement once again, and for your comments on not only mine, but Laurettas and everyone else here, we have missed you out and about but be sure that when we catch up it will a chance to have a great drink and chat.

Peter

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Thanks Jeff, for your comments on mix-tape - I think the others were right in that it doesn't flow easily in quite a few places, I keep meaning to take it down and re-write it.
Do you know Dawson is a very old English surnames? - mentioned in the Domesday Book around the Middleton & Rochdale areas.
:-)
Cx

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Thanks for the comments on my book intro...I hope your attempts go well...it's an ardous task...
Once again Thanks
Gus

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Am enjoying writing the more serious ones must admit! Have started to vary it a bit more instead of the gag pieces! You'll see if you are at bolton in a week or so's time! And of course the Poets and.. (Cheers for agreeing to do a slot - it should rock, I hope!)

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Jeff you always leave a comment so I am leaving one here.Its great to hear that you are performing your poetry I would like to perform to a wider audience but I am always so nervous I shake!
Good for you!
peace and love to you!
Dan

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Great to see you getting out and into those gigs!
Good to non poetry audience
Hoping to see you soon
Joint compere somewhere sometime?

whaddd ya saaay

keep writing

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Thanks for your comments Jeff
God I love the pants off Lisbon.... Love the country..... Think I have some Chicken Peri Peri and a Plate of Sardines for My tea....

If not it'll be Gemma's cakes tomoz

Regards Gus

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hiya jeff
i love your poem - I know you're there
i think that would sound brilliant read out loud
its got a great rhythm

sez x

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Jefferama! Thanks for the comment on the serious stuff - I feel happier with the sarcasm but aware I look like a bit of a bitch taking the mick all the time. The next one will probably be about necrophillia. Delivered in the style of a spanish nun.

x

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Dear Jeff,

Thank you for your wonderful comments on my poetry. We seem to be kindred spirits, and yeah, despite our mistakes, we have to move on. We cannot stand still.

I look forward to reading more of your work. Take care.

Melissa

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Hi Jeff :)

Thanks for your continued support!
Have I been touring the NW? Nooo, I'm from Merseyside, love the Pool but live in Moss Side so you know heh
Thanks again
Beth

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Hi Jeff, thanks for your comments about Re-awoken. You are dead right about using "for" instead of "to" and in fact it said that on the original handwritten version.

And yes it does suffer a little from cliches. Seems that "being in love", being something of a cliche itself, causes an overdose of cliches. I can see I may have a bit of a battle against them or I could just embrace them and do something fun with them.

Anyway Jeff, thanks

Seamus

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Hi Jeff,
just to let you know, i think you did a great job of compering at Wigan last night.
If you do as well at your own gig, it will be brilliant for you.
love Janet.xx

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Hi Jeff,
I really did go for a meal with my family.
If you take a look at Tara J Mendes.
My little secret's out of the bag.
At least
( I think ) that's what the first poem was about in "honour" of me. The second one?
Well, maybe one day i'll find out for sure.

Sorry it took so long to reply.
Hope your gig organizing is going smoothly.
love Janet.xx

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Hi, Jeff

Sorry to scare you with my poem. I did not mean that!! This was all fiction my friend.
Thank you for the wonderful comment!

Will not write dark poems anymore...Smile…:))

Have a great weekend!!

Take Care,
Zuzanna

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Hi Jeff...thanks for your comments...it only took me half an hour to scroll down through your comments in order to leave one! I shall send you the bill for my damaged index finger ;-) x

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Jeff, you always take the time to read our work and I'm happy to see you developing in your confidence and writing. I enjoy your work especially because of your musical passions. I am more inspired by good song lyrics than poetry, but then I think good song lyrics are poetry. I think that quality musicians and bands have a lot going for them in terms of poetic influence. Take Roger Waters for example.

Thank you for your kindness and sincerity and understanding.

Its of no surprise that you have so much love here Jeff.

Look forward to seeing you soon. I may get t the green rooms this Thursday.

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Hello Jeff,

Thank you for your comments on my poem. Like you I'm relatively new to writing, and I'm exploring new avenues all the time.

I did think that the ZXombie poem was rather short, so thank you for confirming this for me.

I live and work in Japan and like more and more countries around the world, people are just sooo busy and can't see the wood for the trees, this is what my poem is about, if you hadn't guessed already.

I really like your poems, keep up the good work.

Belinda x

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Hey, Jeff. I hope you are having a great weekend, and keep writing your poetry. I really like your poems.

As for what's happening here, nothing really except starting another retail job unfortunately.

Hope you're having a great weekend.

-Melissa

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Alreet Jeffo... Sunday was a good night. Nay, Sunday was a fine night and one to be recorded in the annuls of WOL folklore.
As far as tribute bands go - I'm afraid I don't do tribute bands. As good as they are, they're not the real McCoy. The Stanglers are inimitable. If I heard a tribute band I wouldn't be able to get the concept of 'Jive Bunny' or 'Stars on 45' out of my head.
It's the boys themselves or nothing for me. If you're going in October/ November let me know. I usually get to a couple of gigs in and around the North West. Although Dublin would be a good one?

Somewhere outside Tokyo invented time.
Someone with a million watches invented time...

Poetry.

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Hello, Jeff

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment on my last poem 'POETRY FRIENDS'

I have missed you my friends - glad to be back!!

Thank you and have a wonderful week!

Cheers!!
Zuzanna

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hiya jeff

thanx for your comment
and thank you for you advice
i apreciate it, it helps me improve

sez x

p.s

im brunette -
i got fed up of doing my roots all the time lol

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Unfortionately I never made it Jeff, but I'm definitely going to be at the next event in Preston because its my home town! I'm sure we'll meet eventually, we may have even already in a parallel world where my name is cir and yours is ffej

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Hi Jeff, I chose timeless finity for its juxtaposition, because we really don't know if the world is infinite or if it will be bound my time just as in the case ourselves, no one really knows if our death will start another timeline going, maybe in a parallel universe, thanks for the comments Jeff! I still need to make it to one of the gigs!

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Hi, Jeff. Thank you so much for your comment on my poem, Fine Line.

I love your poetry and look forward to reading it. :)

Take care.

Melissa

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Hi mate, thaniks for your kind comments, glad I brought a smile to your face. Unfortunately I am better at sharing my words than my nubile asians so you'll have to find your own. I really like 'I know You're There' by the way. Cheers, a

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thanks for the comments Jeff, I guess I had writers block of some kind, need to start writing films again for when I return to uni so been trying to turn to this writing more and been reading and stuff. I'll catch up on your poems soon, what adverts are these? Take care

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Thanks very much for your feedback. I think your poem goes very well with mine, it's so busy sounding, it really gives you the image of people bustling about on a city street. See you next month at Middleton.

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Thank you, Jeff. :)

It was her wedding day, and I should've been there. But I hope she will forgive me one day.

Take care. :)

-Melissa

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Hi Jeff

Thank you for your lovely commet about my poem swim day. I'm the lucky one. Working with special needs children is the most fun I ever had.

Lynda X

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Hi Jeff,

I think a lot of us have felt this kind of pain and humiliation; it is how we deal with it that matters. Thanks for a great comment.

Sincerely Shirley

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Hi Jeff,

I had tears in my eyes reading your beautiful comment. Thank you so much

Sincerely Shirley

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Hey Jeff,

I read your poems, very nice. My favorite is the sea. very beautiful. keep writing out loud.

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