Yolande
I too liked the rolling meter and rhyme (especially the internal ones).
Nice poem.
John
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Hi Yo , just catching up on my comments. Thanks for yours on For whom The Wheel Turns.
Cate xx
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steve mellor
Mon 17th Aug 2009 08:32
Hi Yolande
Glad you enjoyed 'Time Flues'. I'm embarrassed to tell you that this was Dewsbury in the 50's. We were always a bit behind the times here.
I really do appreciate your comment, and hope you enjoy the cross-over from music to poetry. I can't hold a note, so I can't cross back.
Steve
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Hi Yo, thanks for your comment on Our Gramps..... I am watching this space with great anticipation!!!!
Cate xx
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Enjoyed your trad metre and ryhme, Yolande.
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Welcome to WOL - so glad you made that leap. If you get one fraction of the pleasure from poetry that you get from music, it will be very worthwhile.
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Tue 17th Nov 2009 20:33
The alarm sirens are sounding already lol ............. ;-)) Still poets are no worse than anybody else are they........??
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