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Sat 25th Jun 2011 22:08

ta again Bernie-catch you soon.Off to bath ones Herculean torso(and fings-woo-oo!!) Stef.xx

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Sat 25th Jun 2011 20:19

Hi - thanks Bernadette (lost in translation)

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 25th Jun 2011 17:54

Hi Bernadette - so glad you are still around and writing! Thanks for comment on my poem too. xx

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carol falaki

Thu 9th Dec 2010 16:35

Hi Bernadette, Thanks for your kind comment on my blog

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Wed 3rd Nov 2010 22:39

Good evening Berni and Ben-although sad-I was glad to write a little poem for Felix-hope it gets easier for you soon-thinking of you-Stef-xx-xx

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Ann Foxglove

Tue 2nd Nov 2010 19:18

Hi Bernadette - so nice to have you back. So sorry to hear about your cat. I know that we can love a cat just as much as a person. I cried for two weeks when my tabby Sylvester died. I now have Gemma, twenty would you believe!She's hanging on in there! Don't know how I'll feel when she goes! Anyway, keep well and stick around! xxx

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shoeless

Tue 2nd Nov 2010 17:38

thanks for your comment , i have been fairly quiet on here as of late , so am not up to date with reading :) time to make a start i guess :)

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Tue 2nd Nov 2010 12:17

Hi Bernadette , glad you enjoyed my Ghazal (Could be Home). Thanks for leaving a comment. It was especially gratifying as the poem is one of my Ghazals. Win

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Mon 1st Nov 2010 20:35

Very nice indeed to see you back on Bernadette-my best regards to you and family-off for me baff now-hope to catch you later-love-Stef-xxxxxx

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Wed 29th Sep 2010 21:48

Good evening Bernadette-hope all is ok with you-hope to see you soon-best regards-Stef-xx

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Sun 12th Sep 2010 20:58

night night Herbydacious! kip well chuck-best regards ter yew n yours-Stef-xxx

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Fri 10th Sep 2010 09:04

Gooooooooooooood morning Bernadette-hope you are well chuck-see ya soon! lorra love-Wildey-xxxxxx

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Wed 8th Sep 2010 11:23

Good morning Mrs H-hope alls well with you and yours-best regards-Stef-xx

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Sun 5th Sep 2010 22:56

Goood late evening Bernadette-hope alls well with you,and your weekend has been good too-hope to see you soon-best regards to you and yours-Stef-xx

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Sat 4th Sep 2010 15:06

Mr Potato head calling in to say-hope you and yours are well Bernadette-and not too busy to miss out on the wonderful weather we are having-don,t worry about replying-see you along the way love-ta chuck-Stef-xx

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Thu 2nd Sep 2010 10:53

Gooood morning Bernadette-hope you are well today love-ta absolutely loads for your kindness-I wont mither you every day,but I just want to pop on here now and again to see how you are keeping-dont feel obliged to rush any poems on when you are busy of course-anything I might possibly be able to help you with re poems generally,let me know-might not be much but it will be my best-lol! ta Bernadette again-best regards-Stef-xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Wed 1st Sep 2010 10:06

Gooooooood morning Herbychops-hope all is well with you and yours-see yer soon ducky! lorra love Stef-xx

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Mon 30th Aug 2010 09:53

Good morning Bernadette-just popped in to say hope you are well and enjoy your day-catch you later-Stef-xx

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 25th Aug 2010 21:56

Hello Bernadette, you asked about Haiku.
The true answer would probably take a couple of pages to describe it in its purest form, but on the whole, here in the UK it is taken to mean a three line poem with five syllables in the first and third lines and seven in the second. The lines should relate to each other in some way, as Dave's does quite well. Hope this helps

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Lynn Dye

Wed 25th Aug 2010 21:23

Hi Bernie, thank you for lovely comments on "Jimmy". Re the pictures, I started to google "images for" followed by the subject, and searched for something I liked the look of. Where there's a will.... lol. Love, Lynn xx

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jean lucy thompson

Wed 25th Aug 2010 21:21

Yes ty Bernadette; for your comments on Was This the Plan I agree sometimes I do feel its all planned out ahead for us grrr x

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 25th Aug 2010 12:03

Hi again Bernie! I always felt it was enough to let the poems flow out, then let them be. Just recently I've started reading more poetry. It can get quite depressing sometimes when you read wonderful stuff, but then you get inspired (hopefully!) I do think I "overwrite", put too much info in, lead the reader into what to think and how to interpret the poem. I do want to try and leave more for the reader to do. We're all learning, after all! But I feel (typical gemini!) like too poets split down the middle at the moment! Take care - done any more decorating lately? ;-) xxxx

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 25th Aug 2010 08:13

Hi Bernie - thanks for kind comments here and there. I loved your Alphabet Lover poem. lots of love Ann xx

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Lynn Dye

Tue 24th Aug 2010 22:00

Wow Bernadette, three grandsons and another on the way! My daughter was like that, having three girls in a row, but now she has evened it up a bit with two boys. We thought she'd finished after the first boy, but no...! They are all marvellous though of course, and we have 6 grandkids altogether, our other daughter has just one girl.

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Tue 24th Aug 2010 00:04

"As yet Untitled" is a lovely rhyming poem.

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Mon 23rd Aug 2010 22:23

Hi - I just could not find any poems in the others - they were still almost unbelievable for me & I wrote at the time, of one of them, that it actually seemed to be more real than real life & that one is really capable of logical thought processes within a dream - just like in real life, only here you can do whatever you like. That was the tragedy of this dream - that I could have asked any question & been given the answer (hence the title) but I couldn't think of a single thing to ask - what a waste. all the best. B

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Mon 23rd Aug 2010 18:11

Hi - "the guy with all the answers" - Thanks for the v kind comments. This is an amalgam of 2 lucid dreams I had (my previous poem was the first) - although I had been trying for years, they came out of the blue. I've only ever had 5 or 6 in total. I wrote them all down, but I dont think the others have much poetic potential. all the best. B

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Fri 20th Aug 2010 23:35

Hi Berny-just popped on to say hi-hope you and the cutey pie on pik are keeping ok-catch you soon-Stef-xx

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jean lucy thompson

Fri 20th Aug 2010 12:39

Thanks you so much for the comments on my poem Woman of the Flowing Hair :)

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Lynn Dye

Wed 18th Aug 2010 21:56

Hi Bernadette, thank you for kind comments on the 17 1/2 sequels. Nice to hear from you again, hope you are well. Love Lynn xx

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Wed 18th Aug 2010 09:44

Gooooooooooooood morning Herbygirl! ta chuck for comments and posting on my profile-hope you are not overdoing things generally-as to my fine figure poet image...that was taken when I was twenty one...hee hee! hope very much to see you on blogs soon-indeed,they are quite busy-and the poetry is absolutely amazing for sure! thanks love-my best regards to you and yours-Stefan-xx

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Wed 18th Aug 2010 08:54

Hi, Bernadette! Thank you very much for the comments on my poems "The chat of two women" and "Life is short". With warmest wishes, Larisa

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Wed 11th Aug 2010 23:20

ay up lass!how are you keeping Bernadette? nice to see you on again-I,m nicking off to kip-catch you in the morning? best regards-Stef-xx

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Mon 9th Aug 2010 10:46

hey you! where are ya! hope you are keeping grand-later m'dear-Stef-xx

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sat 7th Aug 2010 11:26

Hi, Bernadette! Thank you so much for the comment on my poem "It seems I wanted too much". With warmest wishes, Larisa

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 21:39

Good evening lovely girly-thanks for comments regarding both our Mothers-and indeed you are so right! hope you are well my friend-and!-I,ll catch you later-enjoy your evening Bernadette-Stef-xx

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Wed 4th Aug 2010 17:46

Gooooood evening Bernadette! yes they have made a slight change to the profile apparently-but just click on 'profiles' and its the same format as before-hope you are well-and I,ll catch you later-Stef-xx

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Lynn Dye

Mon 2nd Aug 2010 19:15

Hi Bernadette, thanks for comments on "A Perfect 10", also thank you so much for lovely comments on 17&half +1day, if you like short stories in poem form, did you see my Angel poems, think the first was in May and the other 4 in June. Probably worth reading even if it's just for Stef's hilarious comments throughout! Yes, will have to do some more on this one too. Thanks again, Luv Lynn xx

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 1st Aug 2010 21:34

Hi Bernie my friend - I have been taken up with visitors and stuff - will get back to communicating soon! xxxx

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 18:58

oh! you see-you are doing it again-stop worrying about posting-put a poem on when it suits you-not anyone else.keep cool girly! yours truly-Mr Potato head-xx

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 17:24

Good evening lovely Lady-your request,regarding a happy ending romantic poem has been noted and will soon be undertaken.Sincerely hope you have had a nice week-end and that your week goes well-thank you so much for comments on'Biding my time' and all of your kind thoughts,be thinking of you-speak soon-Steffers-xxxx

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sun 1st Aug 2010 16:25

Hi, dear Bernadette! Thank you very much for your beautiful comment on my "Something about me". With warmest wishes to you and your family, Larisa

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Lynn Dye

Sun 1st Aug 2010 13:09

Hi Bernadette, just posted an answer to you on my 17½ poem. I do remember those coffee ads, they were good, weren't they, but I'm sure Stefan's hoping for a sequel cos I wrote a series on the Angel and the Beachcomber. Anyway, I had fun with writing this sequel, so thanks to both of you for that!! Lynn xxx

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Sat 31st Jul 2010 21:29

Hi lovely Bernadette-thanks for recent comments.Glad you have bucked up-but if I see that bottom lip ever quivver again,over Uncle Stefs knee you go!! you are gonna do-and-be fine...I can feel it in me' 'osepipe! lotsa 'ugs'n'kisses-Stef-xxxx

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Lynn Dye

Sat 31st Jul 2010 13:51

Hi Bernadette, thank you kindly for lovely comment on "Seduction". Glad you liked it, my friend. xx

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Sat 31st Jul 2010 09:27

Goooood morning Herbychops! any probs in future I can help you with just write to..Uncle Stefs Problem Page...I,ll see what I can do! no promises mind! todays suggestion is...stop worrying...stop critiscising yer'self...learn to love yer Uncle Stef more each day! as you should be doing of yer'self as well! keep happy me little 'darlin...Stef-xx

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Lynn Dye

Fri 30th Jul 2010 23:07

Hi Bernadette, thank you so much for lovely comments on 17½ and Seal Pups. I did enjoy Life's Puzzle - good to have you back posting again! Lynn xx

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 16:20

Hi again Bernadette-do not trouble yourself regarding writing poems,as I mentioned before,you will like all of us improve with time-no one begins at the top.But it is neccessary to keep reading and listening to poetry audios etc.I,m no better or worse than your good self...just keep plugging away,and who knows one day!.....love-Stef-xx

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 16:08

Good afternoon to you my lovely friend Bernadette-your kind comment on 'Always-Yes!is very much appreciated-thanks girly! lorrer luv-Stef-xx

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 08:41

Good morning sweetness and light! yep no problems regarding your poem'Lifes puzzles'-I was indicating that you-are-getting better at writing poems,as I can see having read this poem-thanks very much for comments on'Togetherness'-keep well ducky-catch you later-glad you have put your paintbrushes down for a while by the way-Stef-xx

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