i love this poem and relate to it......this how i felt as teenagerteenager.....love the rhythm and rhyme.....the. themes ...ideas.....emotions are effectively portrayed and conveyed....
constructive criticism....rewrite....edit these 2 lines because rhythm and effect lost a little:
"Nothing has to have happened so don't question me about it
Just know I don't want to be like this one bit"
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I think that the country are with you on that one Sian. ;-))
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Big big day for the Foxes! Sian you will HAVE to write a piece about today. Every football supporter in the land and beyond will be cheering you on. What an amazing event in prospect. Come on you Foxes!! Tommy
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Sian, I, along with millions of other football supporters of various teams, welcome this transformation of Leicester without vast sums of capital who have enthralled a nation. Tommy :~)
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Phillip Kelly
Thu 5th May 2016 08:43
id love to write a poem together with you......shared collaborative poetry
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