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With an illusion

With an illusion

Saturday, June 30, 2018

9:12 PM

 

we live with an illusion 

there is no confusion at all

it is the tendency to wait for the miracle

and avoid the struggle 

 

we are a total failure 

and still, want to make it sure

that despite our being dishonest

everything must be seen as the best

 

the world is same

but we claim

the safe place with...

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In friend circle

In friend circle


It has two ways
to understand and firmly stay
with an insight knowledge
and with the firm opinion to manage


you get full satisfaction
with the self-realization
that you were fully in agreement
and understood its contents


sometimes it so happens
that you are not given
or made to understand
the actual intent and stand taken


In friend circle or anywhere
...

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Best mean

 Best mean

Wednesday, 27th June 2018

 

It is not easy to talk

and comfortably walk 

at length on the subject

and summarise an act

 

but the talk facilitates

and relates

what is actually going on 

in your mind to speak on

 

not all the people understand 

why is it not easy to take the stand 

and open up to strangers

with hidden anger

 

So I love...

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Great dissimilarity

Great dissimilarity

Wednesday, 27th June 2018

 

Good sense always prevail

and human beings avail

best opportunities on the hand

develop the close bond and make friends

 

Millions suffer poverty

gifted by an almighty

they struggle day and night

to meet two ends and fight

 

for them, the survival is at stake

the dry bread looks like the sweet cake

they ha...

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Life angle

 

Life angle to reveal

Monday, 25th June 2018

 

Everybody lives here

even animals exist without fear

life goes on with success or failure

such is our life's tenure

 

all people

make the way with the struggle

going on with the endless mission

despite having so much of confusion

 

but I have decided to be holy

In approach and in reality

not causing any...

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Wrong or right

Wrong or right

Saturday,23rd June 2018

 

who shall say?

and show the way

to choose right

and fight for the justice

 

one should know

where and how to go!

select the right path

until the arrival of the death

 

right for one may be wrong for other

so it is left for all to assure

that what he chooses is the right one

and may not be altered later on

 

...

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The danger to the society

The danger to the society

Saturday, 23rd June 2018

 

We are infested on two fronts

do the right people want?

the execution of the same

and claim the innocence

 

the society has suffered a lot

as these people are not caught

either by the intelligent way

and still stayed safe

 

india has a clear culture

but learned people make them suffer

dupe them of the...

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Kind gesture towards

 

Show small gesture

that shall shine your future

you shall dominate position

and that shall strengthen human relation

 

let it look small

but shall call

same intensity response

and add a good sense

 

the flow of small wind is acceptable

but high-speed wind may cause trouble

the trees shall be uprooted

the property shall be highly damaged

 

nature ha...

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Guilty mind

Guilty mind 

Friday,22nd June 2018

We are human beings
and social animals too
we make human errors
and later on, offer the prayers

this is an advantage
and we sincerely manage 
with an open mind 
we cleverly find the ways 

we have a compulsion
and no confusion 
we intentionally commit the acts
and later on, admit the guilt in fact 

nothing wrong, if it is admitted
before a...

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Hand in hand

Hand in hand

Wednesday, 20th June 2018

 

Yes, it is all the same

but I don't claim

any credit for the long association

it was only one link and that was the relation

 

I felt it closely

and never felt it with remorse

i carried on with the total commitment

and made it a memorable event

 

life as I understood

it was thought for the food

we lived with happ...

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Response

Responses

Tuesday, June 2018

 

Response or no response

one shouldn't feel tense

one should agree on this point

His or her poems should be painted with poetry colors

 

One doesn't write to please someone

but to strengthen

the close bonds with the readers

and if possible render some service as the writer

 

as we go in for supporting newcomers

there remains n...

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 Tears fall… Love you, dad

  

 

Tears fall… Love you, dad

Sunday, June 17, 2018

9:59 PM

 

 

The tears fill my eyes

when I try to memorize

His picture in mind

I only find his kindness

 

what a feeling for a small kid?

when he goes to read his result

and feels insulted

when the response comes " well done"

 

But I feel so great

when he states

to others about

my being ...

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Thank God and think

Thank God and think

Saturday, 17th June 2018

 

Think of no gun

as it shall be big fun

you shall not be able to run

so far goal is achieved by none

 

even if it is jokingly said

the heavy price is to be paid

for being disrespectful to the creator

and you shall never have the honor

 

he does everything

not a leaf moves to bring

the fresh air

if you pla...

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Visible lines

Visible lines

Friday, 15h June 2018

 

The human relations are such

that we are moved to teach

on this issue and raise our voice

with the positive promises

 

I care for such sentiments

and present

valuable information

for its long duration

 

I realized that you are not only the real woman

but kind-hearted and good human

you expressed willingness

to sh...

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I wait for

I wait for

Thursday,14th June 2018

 

I am novice

yet wait for promises

and those sweet words

that show me forward path

 

your feet sound

definitely send

some signals

of your arrival

 

yes, it makes me joyful

and cheerful too

as I can smell your presence

and prepare to take the chance

 

I have told you often

that my heaven

and destiny is i...

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The world may hear

The world may hear

 

Monday, Jube 11 2018

 

The time has passed and a new air of certainty has blown

the world is trying to come closer and the result may become known

The memorandum may be signed

to strengthen the belief and peace may be reigned

 

we appreciate the gesture

that shall guarantee the human future

with the slogan of one world one family

as bestowed...

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Dark coudds

Total dark

Monday, 11th June 2018

 

It is total dark

as I can't start

for the ungrateful people

who have seen no struggle

 

there is the limit

at a point where you stop to greet

such people

who can be seen only ordinary individuals

 

I think it is a final farewell

and it must clearly tell

and also reveal

how you feel!

 

people may come and go

...

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Poets never die

Poets never die

 

Sunday, 10th June 2018

 

Yes, you are a heavenly abode

and we all bade

not in mourning

but as readers being

 

who says"poets die"

and no one may try

thereafter to recite your creations

it is woven in our human relation

 

only mortal shall vanish

when life is finished

but the poems become immortal

and read by all the people

 

...

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No moral ground

No moral ground involved

I could not resist
but she insisted
and tempted me to fall in line
that is how I could not decline

why should anyone feel regret 
as it was willingly let
it is like normal hunger
and adults do offer

No morality question involved dear 
so keep no fear
it is correct to hold morality ground 
but no concrete substance is found in that argument

nothing happ...

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Strong resentment

Strong resentment

 

Sunday, 10th June 2018

 

I am not helpless

so tell it on the face

I love my brother readers

and dear poetesses

 

I have written many poems

concerning to them for personalities

as I am being gifted

of reading face lines

 

I can read lines and evaluate

what is she trying to state

what lies within her heart chamber?

whether she is...

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Given call

Given call

 

Saturday, 9 th June 2018

 

It is good to be read by only editors

and remain unconcerned by the readers

as flies also chose known flowers

you must remain the only observer

 

it is the fault of the silent river

that flows with the abundant waters

its main duty is to serve both the banks

and disappear in the sands

 

what can an editor do?

if h...

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Collective responsibility

Collective responsibility

 

Friday, 8th June 2018

 

It has no meaning

for freedom and liberty winning

if people are not fully educated

and politicians are not related properly to the national interests

 

in democracy, it is the collective responsibility

and everybody is aware of the national identity

the constitution is not allowed

to be used against or subverte...

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True observance

True observance

 

Thursday, 7th June 2018

 

The silence is the best

you can deliver still the best 

but not always, it pays

it brings disgrace all the ways

 

keep silene when it is needed to 

listen to the advise and get it heeded

but not the dead silence

against repression and injustice

 

the silence may be the formidable weapon 

but the freedom can't ...

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Little difficult

Little difficult

 

Yes, we want everyday good things to happen
and also wish a good place in the heaven
It has become a formality and yet a firm tradition
with an intention to maintain good relation


we don't know what shall happen in the daytime
whether we shall do the charitable job or adopt the criminal way
but the return shall definitely reveal
and make you serious to feel

 

...

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Real an angel

 

Tuesday, June 5, 2018

10:09 PM

 

Her face shines like light's reflection

and her words speak of an impressive reflection

 I am proud to be her close literature friend

as it helps me a lot in the end

 

she writes with the in-depth touch

and it gives me the real insight

 into what the poetess can reveal

 and we also visibly feel

 

Being British national

...

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Decent farewell

Decent farewell

 

Tuesday,5th June 2018

 

Why is burial must?

if you believe in tradition and trust

why are the religion rituals aim at decent farewell?

is the soul going to witness the final journey?

 

whatever he or she did during the lifespan

as bad or good human being

the people may be knowing about it

yet they shall join the funeral procession

 

the i...

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Steady presentation

Steady presentation

 

Tuesday, 5thJune 2018

 

Julie Miles Hello, Hasmukh. I enjoyed reading some of your poems, and found them authentically delightful, as ever. ~J, TBHP

 

Such is a wonderful response

that makes me repose

more trust on my reader friends

they are my ultimate end

 

why do I rush for their co-operative hand?

they not only become a close and intima...

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Total peace in the mind

 

Total peace in the mind

Sunday, June 3, 2018

10:10 PM

 

No other color fascinates me than the white

it urges me to fight

against the injustice

and breach of the promises

 

I surrender to the justice

and bow the head to promise

there shall be no repeat of mistakes

for staking the claim wrongly

 

In olden times, the armies used to raise the whie flag

...

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Normal human life

Normal human

 

Saturday, 2nd June,2018

 

I feel no load

as it leads to the safe road

I will have to carry on

the battle has to be won

 

as mother

I offer

my sincere efforts

to rach to then safe port

 

Life may have no soft corner

but I gather

no frustration

and strengthen the family relation

 

I might have bent back

but so much is at stak...

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Safe in arms

Safe in arm

Saturday,2nd June 2018

I have only one ambition

to cultivate the relationship

and remain with you

for all the time to come and view

 

I have no other desire

and admire

your behavior

to protect my honor

 

I could have taken another stand

and reached to the dead end

by making refusal

as an individual

 

I was of the firm opinion

and we...

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The human quality

Human quality

 

Saturday, 2nd May 8

 

 

Our forefathers have said it

elders have added in it

an old epic revealed more about it

life is precious and hence must be greeted

 

many intelligent people question

"who am I'? where from have I come?

for them, life is a burden and don't welcome

they always speak with boredom

 

life has its own charm

if you ca...

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Mental arrogance

Mental arrogance

 

Friday,1st June 2018

 

What do you know about the life?

is it full of strife?

well, it has some swings

and it can also bring cheers

 

it is not the people

who struggle

for two ends to meet

but influential people who fail to greet

 

life may pose a problem

but we can tackle it

live with the bare source

but there is resolve to fac...

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