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The Young Fool

Oh how I was the fool 

a girl who saw the heat in your flume 

you struck me like a star in the night sky 

but burned me like a nick on my rear thigh. 

Your lies cut me into many pieces of broken glass 

I felt your light distinguish with the slightest of gasps.

i didn’t even get to say goodbye, 

for you disappeared like a whisper

into the night sky ... 

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