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There's a heart somewhere...

There is a tiny slip of a poem that popped into my head whilst driving in a state of elevated amour some while back. Try as I might I could never think of a second verse, let alone a third or fourth....and then I posted it on my blog and within seconds Alvin came up with a corker. Immediately I thought of a third. I wonder if we can take it further together...?

Rules? Cut and paste the whole lot and add your verse....that's all.

: )

Jx

There's a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine
And on the road there is a sign
'This Heart Welcomes Careful Drivers'

There's a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine
And on the road there is a sign
'This Heart Takes Priority Over Oncoming Vehicles'

There's a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine
And on the road there is a sign
'Slow.....Children!'

Take it away.

: )

Jx
Thu, 8 Oct 2009 04:05 pm
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Hi john, can't follow the rules, sorry, cut and paste is ok when dealing with 'my documents' etc, but get a little lost sometimes with it all, so will add a verse.

There's a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine.
And on the road there is a sign.
'Beware.............heart crossing!'.

Thu, 15 Oct 2009 11:55 pm
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There's a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine
And on the road there is a sign
'This Heart Welcomes Careful Drivers'

There's a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine
And on the road there is a sign
'This Heart Takes Priority Over Oncoming Vehicles'

There's a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine
And on the road there is a sign
'Slow.....Children!'

There's a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine.
And on the road there is a sign.
'Beware.............heart crossing!'.

There is a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine
And on the road there is a sign
In words I cannot understand
'Verboden Liefde
Verboden Liefde' IM

Fri, 16 Oct 2009 01:05 pm
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There's a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine
And on the road there is a sign
'This Heart Welcomes Careful Drivers'

There's a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine
And on the road there is a sign
'This Heart Takes Priority Over Oncoming Vehicles'

There's a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine
And on the road there is a sign
'Slow.....Children!'

There's a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine.
And on the road there is a sign.
'Beware.............heart crossing!'.

There is a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine
And on the road there is a sign
In words I cannot understand
'Verboden Liefde
Verboden Liefde' IM

There's a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine
And on the road there is a sign
Take great care of this precious load
You have reached your destination

Fri, 16 Oct 2009 02:20 pm
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There's a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine
And on the road there is a sign
'This Heart Welcomes Careful Drivers'

There's a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine
And on the road there is a sign
'This Heart Takes Priority Over Oncoming Vehicles'

There's a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine
And on the road there is a sign
'Slow.....Children!'

There's a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine.
And on the road there is a sign.
'Beware.............heart crossing!'.

There is a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine
And on the road there is a sign
In words I cannot understand
'Verboden Liefde
Verboden Liefde' IM

There's a heart somewhere that's twinned with mine
And on the road there is a sign
Take great care of this precious load
You have reached your destination

There is a heart that`s twinned with mine
And on the road there is a sign
Proceed with care all ye who dare.
Fri, 16 Oct 2009 05:02 pm
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This is brilliant! I mean, really lovely. It's so wonderful to access other folk's imaginations in such a way.

: )

Jx
Fri, 16 Oct 2009 08:14 pm
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Glad you like it - I do too. I think you gave us a very nice starting point - an interesting and totally fresh approach to well worn subject.
Fri, 16 Oct 2009 11:03 pm
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