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RESPECTING WHAT'S DEAD AND BURIED

A sea of masks greeted the opening of the abbey doors.

"What do you want?" asked the caretaker

from his dedicated scrubbing of the tiled floor.

"We're here to get the ashes of Kipling,

that jingo imperialist that lies below."

 

The sanctuary was sacrosanct,

but the threat seemed real enough.

A crowd cannot be easily swayed

and in they burst

with eyes ablaze and digging tools.

 

The forces of law were holding back

aware of the public swell of sympathy

and how the statues were coming down,

but the caretaker had no subtle plan

other than to serve his cause

as defender of the sacred space.

 

What took place cannot be writ

for where is the half of the sense of it?

History will reveal it no doubt

and in the fullness of time

new generations reshaped will cast a biased eye

upon that caretaker and how his fame

carved a tablet to perpetuate his name.

 

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raypool

Wed 17th Jun 2020 22:08

That's nice of you Po. Some you win attention for as with this while others fall flat. In view of my now limited comments on others work it does give me cause!

Thanks too Stephen for your like.

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raypool

Tue 16th Jun 2020 22:50

Thank you for an uplifting comment Trevor. I know our previous exchanges a while back had some useful substance to them, so it' good to get a true and accurate observation on this effort. I wouldn't ask for more. I'll try and catch up with your own poems.

Ray

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trevor homer

Tue 16th Jun 2020 20:29

I sensed when our paths crossed Ray that you had integrity. It shows in this piece of writing. I don't see any glorification of Kipling other than to give the poem a centre. Glad I decided to tune in.

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raypool

Sun 14th Jun 2020 22:14

Thanks Mark. I can see that the poem you quoted has all the hallmarks of the time - patriotism and fiery rhetoric - quasi religiose, and gives a clue to the prevailing view of Empire and glory. We can't really go back to those times now other than for nostalgic reasons, and there is blood in the writing. Through a veil of sheer suffering and sacrifice we still see the measure of the man though!

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 14th Jun 2020 17:00

Nice one, Ray..
Kipling surely wrote to entertain those of his time but he also had
the insight that propelled him into immortality. His "Processional
Hymn" has content that may be considered as racist but displays
many great lines - such as...
"Far called our navies fade away,
On dune and headland sinks the fire;
Lo, all our pomp of yesterday
Is one with Nineveh and Tyre
Lord God of Hosts
Be with us yet
Lest we forget
Lest we forget"

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raypool

Sun 14th Jun 2020 12:27

Thanks for the response Jennifer. You have touched on the whole essence of this current witch hunt which can be justified or condemned according to one's own attitudes. I used Kipling as I know he is buried in Westminster Abbey, and know that he along with other influential people of his time, may have unwittingly embraced "tainted" views that some might in the heat of indiscriminate passion be regarded as unacceptable.(An awful word really as it can be changed according to social attitudes).

What I admire about him is that he integrated in every sense and was able to pass on so much of his experiences for the benefit of us all.

Ray

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jennifer Malden

Sun 14th Jun 2020 10:24

If you read Kim, the whole book is a hymn of love, affection and understanding for India and its peoples. Also in 'Kabir's' verse -
In my brother's voice I hear
My own unanswered agonies.
His God is as his fates assign-
His prayer is all the world's - and mine.

Kipling made his living from his writing, and so was at least partly constrained to comply with the general mindset of his times.
History is history for better or worse. Nowadays it seems that history is only this year's.
Jennifer

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raypool

Sat 13th Jun 2020 20:05

Thanks Po. Fantasy or future fact? A place I like to dwell in .

Very kind Ghazala..I'm not politically motivated but like to poke about for the unusual in life. I try not to be partisan. I value your comments.

I thought there was.more to it than that but thanks John .sadly my knowledge of history was interrupted by inattention. Talented man though.

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John Coopey

Sat 13th Jun 2020 10:03

Kipling is most specifically decried as racist for Gunga Din. The poem actually debunks the myth of white supremacy and is in fact the very opposite - an homage to his regimental bhisti,
“You’re a better man than I am, Gunga Din”.

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Fri 12th Jun 2020 22:32

I respect your views. A great insight. In today's time there are very few who would realize. Thought provoking write Ray. As always a master stroke.

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