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The Fledgling

 

Within tall grass I heard a cheep

a baby bird there at my feet

so suddenly it had occurred

it startled me more than the bird

 

Without a peep its silence kept

so quiet I almost stepped on it

from nest it fell and wandered here

but camouflaged it had no fear

 

It stared at me, just looking up

surprised me by the stance it took

so small it barely left a trace

yet fortunate it was still safe

 

It took position in these weeds

to avoid the prey who sight unseen

could swoop in if it was revealed

take baby bird as its next meal

 

I spoke some words to give it cheer

encouraged it to persevere

then left it there, no feather stirred

followed advice to not disturb

 

Was it fate or coincidence

this little bird turned up by chance

an odd but lucky happenstance

I stumbled on by accident

 

The baby bird who dared to roam

I hoped would soon return to home

for in the end, it would be best

if baby bird returned to nest

 

The lesson then, we can discern

is that by taking chances we all learn

life is a challenge, yet when we persist

the experience well worth the risk.

 

 

 

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Comments

MortimerBlooming

Thu 18th Jun 2020 09:06

Now that's a sweet poem, let's hope the whole world is as kind to baby birds as you,

Mortimer

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Shifa Maqba

Thu 18th Jun 2020 07:31

Such a warm & uplifting poem! :D

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 18th Jun 2020 00:11

A "natural" in terms of observation! This reminds me of an incident
during a long distance walk in Scotland when moving along quietly through an area of woodland. One of our small group motioned for
us to remain silent and nodded to the side where, curled up in the
foliage, was a baby deer. Making no sign or sound that might
disturb it and perhaps cause it to panic and become lost to its
parent , we passed on, marvelling at the unexpected sight presented
to us.

<Deleted User> (24803)

Wed 17th Jun 2020 12:47

Beautiful write.

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