FINAL JOURNEY
Layers of memory revived
like the clouds and steam
drifting in a journey behind glass
travelling as before
always in second class.
Savouring one last visit to the past
peppered with loving detail
of mad rail highway vistas
fellow passengers
bound together by impending death
sharing one final wish fulfilment
like a last cigarette.
Then a ticket collector came
calling out everyone's name.
"Many happy returns," I said
and many laughed,
but none seemed jarred
by casual humour misplaced.
And the loco lurched in its hot channel
to take on a breathless viaduct with distant views
almost too impressive to bear.
raypool
Mon 29th Jun 2020 17:00
Nearly missed your comment sorry Jennifer. Reading this back I think my first verse just hit a rolling metre. I have to try humour most of the time. Thanks!
Ray