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They’ve pulled down the village club;

all that’s left’s a stone and plaque to war they said was great.

Starter homes now stand between the one-time shop and pub;

the first grey tentacles perhaps, of yet another sink estate.

In the shadow of the quarry face the limekiln chimney’s long returned to dust

and railway veins to all the world are gone to rot and rust.

 

Here marriages were sealed, and torn,

children christened, birthdays blessed with friends,

friendships foundered, died and were reborn

and solemn wakes for those who’d reached their ends.

No favoured tankard waits behind a bar at six for lime-dry lips;

no ashtray overflows with Woodbine butts or lipsticked filter tips.

 

Once weekly wages balanced on the falling of a card,

dominoes clicked and cracked like old black bones,

a jukebox sang that love was soft and times were hard

and memories were soundtracked by Elvis or the Stones.

Cortina back seats in the car-park darkness kindled accidental lives

and instinct conquered innocence to turn schoolgirls into wives.

 

Here was release in pies and pints from drudgery and graft,

where comics on the sequin stage sold jokes in black and blue,

where rock hard men from rock hard lives drank and sang and laughed

and left their Monday mornings at the far end of the queue.

Where strippers writhed on Sundays while wives stayed home and cooked

and through mushy veg and dried-up meat they’d swear they never looked.

 

Always a do on Saturday night, always the Marks and Spencer shirt

and bingo (was she worth it?) with a hundred prayers for every call

and while a fat bloke sang just like Tom Jones they’d drink, they’d dance, they’d flirt;

a hundred lives, a hundred small reflections in the facets of a mirror ball.

Here the old went out to grass to take their turn upon the velvet bowling green,

beside the Co-op, pub and church, with the playground and the graveyard in-between.

 

It’s here he lies, beside old names returned to rock and earth

while time limps slowly by in heavy quarry boots.

The world’s a journey of those few short steps through life to death from birth;

and when we fell the trees we cannot save the roots.

The old men who remember him are fewer every day, sheltered in the quiet lych-gate seat,

but all that’s left’s the echo of a barmaid calling time, and a losing bingo ticket blowing up the empty street.

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Cate Greenlees

Sun 16th May 2010 11:58

Agree with everything said...a wonderful trip down memory lane.Beautifully evocative wording of a bygone age.
Cate xx

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Chris Dawson

Fri 14th May 2010 10:53

I think everybody has said it all already - well written, moving, & evocative of Tony Harrison ... excellent piece of work Anthony.
And I, too, am pleased you're back!
Cx

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 14th May 2010 08:17

A wonderful poem Anthony, full of ghosts. Your reading is very moving too. xx

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Val Cook

Fri 14th May 2010 06:07

So many excellent images Anthony. Sad, but true reflections of how it was. Well written and read. I endorse all the comment posted here.

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Francine

Thu 13th May 2010 21:28

Memories of the past that reflect different values...
Life seems to pass by so quickly now because everyone is in a rush.

One of my favourite lines:
'a jukebox sang that love was soft and times were hard'


So nice to have you back sharing your poetry again Anthony.

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Dave Bradley

Thu 13th May 2010 19:14

Excellent poem, Anthony - so evocative and with some lovely phrases. It's harder to 'do community' now, as lives have become so diverse, but it does still happen.

Did you really write this in Spring? It has a feel of Autumn about it.

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Isobel

Thu 13th May 2010 14:41

A sad one Anthony - beautifully read and constructed.On the face of it about the loss of a social centre but at the heart of it a different story. There is a lot to comment on; the loss of community spirit that arises when housing development ploughs ahead with no 'social' consideration, the certainty of our short walk towards death, the weight of all that history, the importance to the poet of the 'he' at the end. That social club and the man are one and the same - irreplaceable, I think. I would comment on your use of language, but I'd be here all day... I'm more of an ideas and emotions type anyway and this one moves me.So good to have you back. x

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