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The Blue Tit

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He picks and pecks

to get his peck

He pecks and picks

to get his pick

 

He pecks and picks

the pick and mix

He pecks the mix

to feed his chicks

 

The Blue Tit is a fussy bird

With a particular preference of seed

He picks and pecks to get his pick of peck

The Blue Tit is a fussy bird indeed

 

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julie callaghan

Sat 18th Jul 2020 22:45

Thank you for the likes for this little poem.
So pleased how well it has been received.
Po, Some accents may as well be another language, much fun to be had by playing with the spoken word and their British dialect.

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julie callaghan

Fri 17th Jul 2020 16:52

I put them in the Read Aloud app on my pc, unfortunately the pc can read and speak with more clarity than me. I especially struggled with this one as you quite rightly pointed out in your earlier comment.

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julie callaghan

Fri 17th Jul 2020 15:52

Thanks for the comments and likes, wasn’t sure how this on would read to others. I can’t read it out loud myself?

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 17th Jul 2020 13:44

"Tit for tat?" A neat piece of avian activity for our amusement.?

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Hugh

Fri 17th Jul 2020 09:33

A fun tongue twister

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Fri 17th Jul 2020 09:13

Choosy bird
Settles for best
What was thrown
Wasn't bad either
Too many choices
Spoils the bird
What God gives
None can overcome

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julie callaghan

Fri 17th Jul 2020 07:22

I wish I could upload a video of this little bird, chucking out the offending seeds. I think I need to change my bird seed, It is obviously not up to his standard.

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