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Fairly Compensated

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Every passing stage of life that’s risen on the road to greet me,
Has quietly laid to rest, the stage that went before, 
And though I mourn the loss of what has gone, I do not mourn completely, 
For each gave me its all and never left me wanting more,
So as I slowly age and become ever more complicated, 
I do not shed a tear for the passing of my youth, 
For each age that has passed has kept me fairly compensated, 
And though I did not see it then, I know in hindsight that’s the truth, 
So how could I fear growing old and all it’s gifts of time and change, 
When I’ve learnt the precious value, of each and every day,
Trading time for life experience, I’d say that’s a fair exchange, 
And if the price is growing old? Then I will gladly pay.

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 10th Dec 2020 07:06

Thanks Aviva, and you're right of course, it would be far too chaotic, and there's no going back. And Kev you're also right, and I'm sure you know the old saying, "Youth is wasted on the young," Thank you so much Paul I'm pleased you like it, it's genuinely how I feel about life, I mean, it literally is the only deal on the table, "Trading hours and days for life lessons." And MC, maybe we're all old fools in the end, but I prefer to think that we all, "Move with the times," until we can’t move anymore and become, "Of our time." But some experiences are timeless and ever constant. I think maybe that's why as we get older we become more philosophical, because that's what becomes most relevant? But I think maybe we only become an, "Old fool," if we close our minds? ?

J. x

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 6th Dec 2020 16:36

A wise and enjoyable dissertation on the passing pf the years and
how they can make a difference to how we live our lives if we are
perceptive enough to seek the positives on offer in the process and
benefit accordingly. I recall a saying from my own youth: There's no fool like an old fool. Heaven forbid that to be the result of living a life.

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kJ Walker

Sun 6th Dec 2020 12:17

But wouldn't it be great if we could start again, with the knowledge that we have now

Great write

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 6th Dec 2020 10:34

But how much better if it were possible for those who were dissatisfied to get a refund

Edit - No, actually that gets quite dystopian - imagine having to redo each year (or decade?) if you weren't sufficiently satisfied at the end of it.. whilst everyone else moves on. It would be pretty chaotic stuff and how children fit into this world? probably in central facilities so that re-youthing parents won't be too devastating for them.

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