Clouds
lazy drifting
shape shifting
rain gifting
spirits lifting
Sky
gulls wheeling
world ceiling
vast feeling
mind reeling
Space
planets sailing
comets trailing
stars failing
chaos prevailing?
Beyond Space
order reigning
reality maintaining
never waning
always remaining
love training
I love this too...
I like this one Dave. You capture the wonder of looking beyond earth, perfectly. Once you get beyond the clouds, it's awesome, it's scary - it makes you realise just how insignificant you are. The only hope we have is the 'Beyond Space' bit...
It's very nice! I love it. With warmest wishes, Larisa
How lovely! Logged on specially to say so!
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Andy N
Fri 25th Jun 2010 08:13
Very good, Dave.. I like the use of stripped down language in this poem - works really well..
Btw - on your topic of 'thing we don't write about' - i have wrote a poem following on in part from the themes off that piece.. gonna post it up shortly (it is dedicated to you)