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A Message To You

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Your mind is like a patch of earth
And your thoughts are the tiny seeds
Be sure to grow pretty flowers
always suppress the growth of weeds

Your heart is whole like the full moon
and your love shines through just as bright
Be sure to aim towards the stars
let them guide you through the dark night

Your ambition gives you wings
and your dreams can take flight like a bird
Be sure to have no regrets
never be silenced or go unheard

Your soul is deeper than the ocean
and you are stronger than you know
Be sure to ride the crest of the waves
don't drift along on the ebb and flow

Your body is only human
and your feelings are real and true
Be sure to always be kind
never be sorry for just being you

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julie callaghan

Wed 28th Apr 2021 11:03

Thank you Tom and JD for the generous and kind comments. I was unsure of posting this one and I very nearly kept it to myself.?

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J.D. Bardo

Wed 28th Apr 2021 10:15

A wonderful poem, I especially like poems about gardening, and you have done several. I love this one, and hope that it will be seen outside of our poetry community as this is so readable with great points being made. Definitely deserving of publication!! J.D.

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Tom

Wed 28th Apr 2021 09:55

Great write and great message Julie. ?

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julie callaghan

Wed 28th Apr 2021 09:28

Thank you for all the kind likes. Also for the lovely comments Stephen G and Aviva.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 27th Apr 2021 17:16

This is great.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 27th Apr 2021 12:41

Lovely message, perfect from start to finish. ?

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