CONDENSEDPOEM
Therewasapoetman
whowroteandwrote
untilhewasoutofpaper
soheinventedthiswayofwriting
thatsavesspaceandsavespaper
youtoocandoiteasily
condenseyourthoughts
condenseyourwords
nooffense
butjustahint
itmakessense
tocondense.
Comments
Welldonetoreadthiswasgoodfun,
Lessfingertaptoleavenogap.
Anewcodeofpracticeyouhavestarted,
Fromleavingagapwehavenowdeparted.
MegrandadlovedcondensedmilkMmmm
On this subject - pray see(?)
This thought comes to me:
I prefer to make sense
To being seen to be dense.
Wellwrittenpieceimustsay.
Digital files are better place to document your works. Nocondensingrequiredhere.
Wise words. Condensing is good.
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Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Sat 15th May 2021 10:18
Whenwritingwithoutgapshasbeenmadeintolaw
Andnewspapersandbookscannotdoitanymore
Yourpoemwillhavebeentheonethatbeganit
Notjustsavinginkandpaperbutalsotheplanet