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Melancholy Baby

Someone whispered on a fiddle,

a siren blew a horn and stretched

out long notes that slung slow rope

around my baby's neck.

Man came with tape and a pencil,

cut him and coloured him in greys;

cast a net and like a marionette

out in the breeze he sways.

My man looks sorry,

now he's nobody

these melancholy days.

 

An accomplice of the devil,

a Jezebel in disguise

fixed manacles to his ankles

and blindfolded his eyes.

He suffocates and strangles,

I miss the jazz and the jive,

but some sorcery is forcing me

to witness his suicide.

My man is swinging,

can't hear me singing

these melancholy times.

◄ Llanbwychllyn Lake

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Rachel Bond

Mon 26th Jul 2010 02:31

this makes a beautiful song...ill sing it with you if you can find the musicians? if you can get amy you should go with that one :)

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Ray Miller

Sun 25th Jul 2010 19:46

Thanks Rachel and Greg. It is meant to sound like the kind of song Billie Holliday would have sang - or Amy Winehouse. The Jezebel is meant to be Society, drab conformity, wage slavery.

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Greg Freeman

Sat 24th Jul 2010 12:09

Much to admire here, Ray. Like Rachel, I really like the opening four lines and the music and rhythm therein. On first reading though it reminded me of the Billie Holiday song Strange Fruit and thus made me uneasy, but I assume it's more about someone trapped by "a Jezebel in disguise". I could imagine Amy Winehouse singing this. Perhaps you should send it to her!

Rachel Bond

Sat 24th Jul 2010 01:50

i loike the jarring imagery of the first stanza
'Someone whispered on a fiddle,

a siren blew a horn and stretched

out long notes that slung slow rope

around my baby's neck'

great opening lines.

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