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How Did It Get So Late So Soon?

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How Did It Get So Late So Soon?

 

The man who scared the ghosts away,

The woman who healed wounds with a kiss,

I think of them more nowadays

In sad and troubled times like this.

No longer there to hug the pain

From tired bones and broken hearts,

To shield you from the winter rain

That permeates where old age starts.

 

The back garden is over-grown,

The kitchen is a darker place,

These memories are hard to own.

the mirror is so hard to face -

where glimpses of them both reside

and haunt you as you reach the day

that saw the turning of the tide

and saw their brightness slip away.

 

We try to catch the falling star

We try to stop  the ticking clock

but in the end it’s all we are -

a sliver chipped from the old block.

The man who scared the ghosts away

The woman who healed wounds with a kiss

They knew each dog must have its day.

No longer there to tell you this.

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Ian Whiteley

Fri 2nd Jul 2021 15:16

thanks for the wonderfully kind comments - I'm glad and sad it struck a chord.
It is a chilling topic Ray - I think a lot of us feel it as we grow older.
And yes John - much more fight still to come ?
thanks to everyone for the comments and 'likes' I appreciate it ?
Ian

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 30th Jun 2021 21:44

Does a mirror tell us the future, the present, or the past?
In this poem it does all of that and more.

While pondering mirrors, I realised.

If a mirror ahead of us could show the future
And a mirror behind us could show the past
Then we seeing that, between two such mirrors, would realise
That the future is nothing without the past.
And the past is nothing without the future.

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John Coopey

Wed 30th Jun 2021 10:04

Give over, Ian. There’s fight in us yet.
One of your best.

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raypool

Tue 29th Jun 2021 20:16

There's a chill running through this Ian, which I for one recognize in my own musings. Personally I have found the round ball of age has been given a kicking towards some celestial goal - a dislocation on many levels. I know I have altered in subtle and not so subtle ways - so thanks for expressing this. And - I hope you are well in any case. The poem really has a resonance that puts it in a class of its own.

Ray

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Ghazala lari

Tue 29th Jun 2021 16:26

Flashback of what perfection once was. Those were the days my friend! I liked the theme of your poem. Realistic write.?

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