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Workshop exercise of the month

A Skussle of Bips prowl through crumid darkness,
coniphany voices send thoughts of Partet.
The Glucker they seek is salmy
and filled with porm.
Foona-Plate is almost upon them
and soon fildew will be theirs.

◄ Crixus' story

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Isobel

Mon 2nd Aug 2010 20:54

Good on ya Kath - I really admire you for taking the challenge and making such a good job of it. Ray is right about the porm word - I also find the coniphany one hard to get my mind around without tittering... I think I must have a really crude sense of humour!

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 1st Aug 2010 10:30

Wot new language have you been learing Kath? I was just thinking of you this morning, wondering where you'd gone. Glad your back and I LOVE this. Talk about original! xx

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Ray Miller

Sun 1st Aug 2010 08:31

You really ought to call it Thoughts of Partet.The closing two lines are quite beautiful in an odd sort of way! The trouble with "porm" is that it's too close to porn.

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Francine

Sun 1st Aug 2010 01:45

This makes complete sense to me : )

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kath hewitt

Sun 1st Aug 2010 01:07

for july

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