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It was the model spitfire in your front room window
That separated you from that tribe,
We call ‘the old’.

I saw you sometimes at the shops, your movements slow, deliberate,
Arthritic.
You carried a basket, the old-fashioned clumpy kind.
And you were always looking behind you. I thought it was the traffic
You feared, but now I know it was the Messerschmidt ME 262 that still had you in its sights.

Frank, you were too tough with the kids who gathered,
Smoking, talking, laughing, outside your front door.
They were only young. Though I expect
You had forgotten the mess and all that false bonhomie
Before a raid.

At your funeral, I sat at the back, you had family,
Few friends, I noticed. I thought.of your skin,
Safe within the coffin, now
No longer agony to move
Around in.
You told me once it took you two hours to get dressed.

At your funeral, I was transfixed by
That image of that naked Vietnamese girl fleeing napalm
Mixing with your burning descent through the air above
The South Downs as I whispered my goodbyes and cried.

 

 

 

 

 

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 11th Nov 2021 21:06

A truly wonderful poem, John, and a great tribute to that generation who fought in a just, though horrific, war.

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Pete (edbreathe)

Wed 10th Nov 2021 08:14

Actually my Uncle Was Frank too, his ship the Manchester was attacked in the Med and he was a POW in North Africa . Not pleasant by all accounts .
Looks like we were all saved by an army of Franks ! May they all RIP

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John Marks

Tue 9th Nov 2021 23:31

Thank you Pete, Mark, dear Keith, Holden and Ray - all male, does that imply anything? Yes, Keith they inspire me too. I owe such a debt to those men (and they were mostly men) who overcame their fear and fought for our country. The brave are not those who are not afraid but those who ARE afraid but fight anyway.

"The bravest are surely those who have the clearest vision of what is before them, glory and danger alike, and yet notwithstanding go out to meet it." - Thucydides (460 BC - 395 BC), Greek Historian

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raypool

Tue 9th Nov 2021 22:55

a very moving poem John highly effective in relaying feelings and the release of death . It speaks for itself..

Ray

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Nov 2021 22:38

John,
This poem is so very appropriate as we approach November 11. I grew up amongst those generations who had fought in both world wars, my grandfather in the first and my father in the second. My father was called Frank which added to the weight of your words and I remember other Franks as you describe, those in old age, suffering in different ways from their various conflicts. What a debt we owe them. They inspire me to this day.

Thank you for this

Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 9th Nov 2021 20:09

They met danger and death while barely out of their teens and
one wonders how much the survivors thought of themselves
as lucky with all the intrusive afflictions brought by advancing years thereafter. The illustration accompanying these
evocative words brought the following to mind.
I think of the bodies that from burning cockpits spilt
In close combat over England's patchwork quilt.

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Pete (edbreathe)

Tue 9th Nov 2021 19:50

Spitfires a strangely evocative weapon of war

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