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NOVEMBER DAWN

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There's something about a November morning

A struggle twixt darkness and the dawning,

And when the Eleventh Day comes around

That feeling seems even more profound.

 

We lucky souls can lie warm in bed

While others before us lie cold and dead

In distant foreign plots of earth

Far from the soil that saw their birth.

 

Deprived of the future their hopes reserved,

Denied the reward their deeds deserved.

Mortal remains beneath white stones

Mark time as nature claims their bones.

 

Each year the November dawn arrives

On the Eleventh Day to mark the lives

Of the legions we salute this day

As our own iives march on their way.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 13th Nov 2021 13:14

Gail -thank you for the very kind words. My family, like so many
others, has experienced loss in war.

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John Botterill

Fri 12th Nov 2021 16:05

I think this is deeply moving and profound. Excellent subtle inclusion of war imagery. Fabulous poetry!

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 12th Nov 2021 15:05

Thanks, one and all, for taking the trouble to read and "like" this
poem. ?

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