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A Winter Escape

Hope everyone has had a nice Christmas!

And, thank you to local musician Stuart Bell for turning one of my Christmas poems into a lovely little song! 

Hope you enjoy it, but apologize for the sound quality!

 

A winter Escape

 

Like comets we slid 

through the crisp, white grass

In our wake billowed 

a powder-puff mass

 

It floated and swirled 

and twinkled with light

Like low-hanging stars 

broke free of the night

 

And in snow-laden fields 

angels were made

A concertina of limbs

in the snow where we lay

 

We rolled and we frolicked 

and snowballs were thrown 

Not caring one jot 

if we were soaked to the bone!

 

Then, with frozen hands, 

a snowman was made

With a carrot for a nose 

and a hat, old and frayed

 

He had acorns for eyes, 

and twigs for a smile

And around him we danced 

and sang for a while

 

...until arthritis swelled joints

And our limbs were too sore

And the nurse from the home

Couldn't take anymore!

 

We all limped away 

as the kids we once were

Filled up with the joy 

only childhood can stir

 

And, over my shoulder, 

I sneaked one last glance

At our friend the snowman, 

who continued to dance! ☃️

 

Stephen W Atkinson 2019

 

 

◄ I still believe!

Goodbye 2021? ►

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Brenda Wells

Fri 31st Dec 2021 09:17

A lovely and moving poem which has been really energised by it's becoming a song.
What a great team you make!
Hope you had a good Christmas and all the best for the New Year.

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 30th Dec 2021 19:48

Thank you all for the Likes and Wonderful comments, from both of us! 🌈☃️

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 30th Dec 2021 18:23

Enjoyable for its mixture of words and folksy tune in a seasonal song. to lift the spirits. .

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 30th Dec 2021 17:03

Simply fantastic and uplifting. Thanks to both of you.

Holden Moncrieff

Thu 30th Dec 2021 00:19

This is truly lovely, Stephen, both as a poem and a song! 🌷😊

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John Coopey

Wed 29th Dec 2021 22:11

Wonderful stuff, Stephen.

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julie callaghan

Wed 29th Dec 2021 19:26

Thanks for adding the words loved reading it again. It’s a really lovely Christmas tale.

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 29th Dec 2021 18:23


Thought I may as well add the poem
And, Thank you, yes I think he's done a great job! Even though he says he's a terrible singer ... I wish I was as bad.

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keith jeffries

Wed 29th Dec 2021 18:07

Stephen,
Great news. Your name will soon be in lights.
Keith

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John Botterill

Wed 29th Dec 2021 17:23

Wow that's awesome, Stephen!😀

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julie callaghan

Wed 29th Dec 2021 17:04

A Christmas No1. 😁
Hope you had a lovely Christmas.

<Deleted User> (32907)

Wed 29th Dec 2021 16:46

Beautiful!

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