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The Piano

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She returns to what was once her home
now a shadow of how it used to be 
A scene of war ravaged destruction 
devastating and traumatic to see

She steps over once prized possessions
which now lay broken and scattered around
Doors which have been ripped from their hinges 
now lie strewn haphazardly on the ground

Besides the shattered, blown out windows 
and surrounded by internal debris
A dusty, yet pristine white piano
stands solid, upright and blemish free  

She sweeps away the fragments of dirt
takes a seat on the stool and starts to play 
For a moment she escapes this world 
as the music carries her far away

We witness these emotional scenes 
which beg the questions, what is it all for? 
Could there be anything more senseless 
than this vile, ruthless, despicable war? 

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 15th Mar 2022 18:08

Yes, this is special and humbling, Julie.

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raypool

Tue 15th Mar 2022 16:32

Your sentiment works well for me as I have been a pianist all my life, and it reminds me of the film The Pianist, very moving parallel and one which illustrates the frailty but also the beauty of talents during war.

Ray

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julie callaghan

Tue 15th Mar 2022 12:23

Thank you for the kind comments and likes.

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Russell Jacklin

Tue 15th Mar 2022 12:09

The juxtaposition of the insanity of war and the beauty of piano playing highlight the futility of this situation Ukraine finds itself in, a great read, thank you

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John Botterill

Tue 15th Mar 2022 12:05

Wonderful writing, Julie. A true gem. 😓

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 14th Mar 2022 22:11

A Powerful & emotional write, Julie 😪

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Greg Freeman

Mon 14th Mar 2022 19:43

Thank you for continuing to catalogue this barbaric war, Julie, with empathy and pity. Unbearable scenes of a baby being born in a maternity unit under fire in Mariuapol on the news tonight.

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