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Reflections

In the mirror I saw my own fragility 

Sagging contours weighed heavy by age

An arid landscape of fissures and brushland 

Time had eaten away its lustre 

Leaving a fallow space

The eyes, once sparkled crystal blue

Now faded pale & weary

I studied this ageing fossil 

This reflection of reality 

Scratching at the brushland

Wondering what time had done

with the young man I once knew

Then I smiled

And a little sparkle returned to those jaded blue eyes

A little conjuring of the boy still inside

He flipped, his older version, the bird

Fuck you, he said

The mirror image mouthed the same 

And we both parted ways

Agelife

◄ A Winter's Chill

Love ►

Comments

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F.Jae

Thu 10th Nov 2022 14:59

I love this! Well written and nice twist at the end haha!

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Isobel

Sun 18th Sep 2022 10:40

As one also getting on in life, I can really appreciate this poem, the skill in the crafting of the poem as well as the spirit!

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John Botterill

Fri 2nd Sep 2022 22:44

Spot on,Stephen. I've certainly felt the same. Love the ending. Very funny and quite sad. Bravo! 😀

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 1st Sep 2022 18:33

Thank you Keith & Julie (it'll come Julie 😂)
And for the likes Frederick, Ray, Holden, Stephen & Purplemoon 🌈🌷

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keith jeffries

Wed 31st Aug 2022 14:45

A clever poem with humour and good imagery. My reflection in today's mirror provided a landscape ravaged by war and over indulgence in a time of peace.
Good poem.
Thank you for this
Keith

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julie callaghan

Wed 31st Aug 2022 14:36

I can relate. Apart from the brushland for now! 😁

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