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Last Man Standing

 

(On 3 January 2023, Russia announced that 89 of its soldiers had been killed in an attack on Makiivka, Donetsk. Ukraine claimed that the number of dead was 400.)

 

I once travelled home on a London train.

It was packed; people pressed against the doors.

As I squeezed aboard, I noticed a sign:

‘Capacity four hundred; eighty-nine

Seated, the rest standing.’ I looked along

The heaving load of weary passengers,

And thought ‘what if everyone here perished?’

I considered the rows of unclaimed cars,

The hot dinners never to be eaten,

The families still patiently waiting.

But yesterday the real thing happened here:

Yes, they were soldiers; yes, they were Russian,

But cars, dinners and families persist,

While no one, seated or standing, is left.

 

Ukraine

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 15th Jan 2023 16:05

Thank you for your comment, Philip, and thanks to Holden for liking.

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Philip Stevens

Sun 15th Jan 2023 00:50

Pure misery of war, and the barren landscapes of people left behind.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 7th Jan 2023 16:32

Thanks, MC. Democratic countries are less likely to undertake unjustified wars, because the free flow of information ensures that people will not stand for it. (It doesn't work every time, I know). In this war, people have rallied behind a pointless and illegal invasion because they largely believe the state's misinformation, which is not challenged internally. So maybe the instinct is to follow, not fight.

And thanks John C, Hugh, Rudyard and Stephen A.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 6th Jan 2023 16:33

War seems endemic in the human DNA. It's almost as if it was
designed to be so, since it is so frequent. The only "positive"
is the jump-start it can give to progress in various forms, the
result of necessity under extreme duress and the desire for
survival. The conflict between good and evil obtains a form of
salvation for the human spirit, a strange anomaly in this life
we are given, with its huge personal sacrifices demanded in payment. After all, good and evil are human concepts....not
evidentially recognised by the rest of creation in all its various forms. In the most basic destructive form of life, does a virus recognise either?

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 6th Jan 2023 16:33

Thank you Keith, Flyntland, John B and KJ. for all your positive comments. Death on this scale (or any scale) is tragic, especially in a war as pointless and vindictive as this one. As you say, every one has a hinterland of family, friends, interests etc. And the conscipts who have no choice just become cannon fodder for someone else's absurd intentions, as you say, Keith.
Thanks for spotting the typo, KJ.

Thanks to Frederick for the like.

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kJ Walker

Fri 6th Jan 2023 14:24

So sad. Even if they were fighting for the other side.
These lads were mainly conscripts and probably had no wish to be there.

(Check date, it may be a typo)

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John Botterill

Fri 6th Jan 2023 10:56

Poignant and brilliantly written, Stephen. Full of imagination and empathy.

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Flyntland

Fri 6th Jan 2023 09:49

I agree with everything that Keith has said - "absurd intensions" sums up perfectly.

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keith jeffries

Fri 6th Jan 2023 08:36

Stephen,
Thank you for this. The human death toll in war is the real tragedy that affects those who are left behind. Children with no fathers, wives with no husbands, mothers with no sons and friends left bereft. No one wins a battle, even the victorious take casualties. War is destructive and futile. It matters not their nationality, they are still the loved ones of many. This leaves me saddened and yet angered as those who initiate conflict do so for specious and spurious reasons and always ensure that they are not personally involved. Others die for their absurd intentions. An excellent poem which highlights the sheer tragedy of war.
Thank you for this
Keith

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