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The best present

My daughter brought me chocolates & wine.

I said:

you alone would have been fine

She gave me such a loving hug

The type you'd bottle, if only you could

My girl, I said

My Dad, she smiled

And then we just sat for a little while

Nestled in the comfort of reminisce 

Of laughter & holidays & family bliss… 

But, then a beep came from her phone

And I was dropped just like a stone!

She typed away until she went

But, still, I know she's heaven sent.

Fathersday

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 20th Jun 2023 21:59

Thank you so much for the comments Keith (yes, I do count myself a lucky man!) M.C. Kevin, John (The dog might have got to them first 😉)& Stephen. Always appreciated 🌈
And thanks for the likes Manish, Grace, Clare, Stella, Hugh & YRP! 🌷🌷

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 20th Jun 2023 11:40

Says so much about so many things, Stephen. Loved it.

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John Botterill

Tue 20th Jun 2023 08:07

Lovely, Stephen. I like the way your poem tells the whole truth. A delight.
The postal service round us is rubbish. None of my Father's Day cards have been delivered yet... 😌

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 18th Jun 2023 19:39

Perhaps you are just the representative of love that is always
there,. No need to worry about missing your response! If I may suggest, just take comfort in my adaptation of an old saying:
Familiarity breeds content!! 😃

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keith jeffries

Sun 18th Jun 2023 18:23

A poem of familial love directed toward a Dad who is the prime object of that love. You are a lucky man Stephen. Happy Father's Day,
Keith

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