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Night Sight

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The journalist asked nervously:

‘How many Russians have you shot?’

Juggling with his imprecision,

The marksman grunted ‘quite a lot.’

 

I suppose we should not be shocked,

Since he is fighting on our side,

But somehow you feel a shiver

When seeing how so many died.

 

You see them stalked like animals

By cold, nocturnal infra-red.

The night sight clicks; one pot, then more,

Bang! Bang! Job done, they all lie dead.

 

I guess it has to be this way;

Our foes must be spied and halted.

In war life and its end come cheap,

Wrapped in numbers half-reported.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 22nd Jun 2023 13:17

Many thanks, John. A tragic situation in one finds oneself conflicted on many levels.

Thanks to Tom and Manish.

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John Botterill

Wed 21st Jun 2023 22:11

You capture so movingly the paradoxes and confusings of this war, Stephen. 👍

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 21st Jun 2023 05:38

Thank you so much, Keith. I appreciate your insight in this matter and value your comment enormously. War is horrible on so many levels and no one knows this better than those who have direct experience.

My thanks also to Nigel, Hugh, Stephen and Your Royal Poetess.

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keith jeffries

Tue 20th Jun 2023 19:35

Stephen,
Thank you for this poem which touches on the subject of death as being perfunctory which is the very nature of warfare. From experience I know that a life is taken in the twinkling of an eye. The soldier then is dead; that's all there is to it. Coldness is in the air and others deal efficiently with the remains. Life is over. Your poem has a good grasp on this.
Thank you,
Keith

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