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AUTUMN WORSHIP

Autumn, when the world falls at your feet

to worship you with decay

tumbling of dogs and children both

scenes of wind and stunted growth

when sunlight dapples the day. 

 

That's when as like as not you feel

the touch of nature's solemn pride

the retreat of roots beneath the soil

in trenchant ways their downward coil

then put their tricks aside.

 

And all God's newly minted souls

seek to have their say

to teach the wary and the wise

that fantasy wears winter's guise

for a Christmas roundelay. 

 

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◄ WHILE I THINK IT

A GOOD MOAN ►

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raypool

Sat 2nd Dec 2023 17:22

Thanks Graham, you can have those lines for free - I got them for nothing.
I agree with that John. This poem is basically a fantasy to be honest.

Ray

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John Coopey

Wed 22nd Nov 2023 17:35

Not my favourite time of year, Ray, but I recognise it is the start of Nature’s rebirth.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 22nd Nov 2023 17:18

I’d buy that last verse of you Ray if it was for sale!
The first line too!

Good work

G

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raypool

Wed 22nd Nov 2023 16:32

Thanks for looking and liking Aisha and Tim!

Ray

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