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I CAN'T PUT MY FINGER ON IT, BUT...

...the everflowing current of the Now
precipitates us onward, ever on
into an unknowable tomorrow
where all that's won is lost, that's lost is won,
where friends and lovers meet and disavow

their pasts as meaningless, as history,
at best a lesson to be learned and then,
with appropriate prayers of sorrow
put in scrapbooks, museums, rather than
holding them as birthplace of mystery

and invention; where Now reveals the past
to be a Springtime's garden of delights
designed to blossom into fountainheads
of experience, each one a deluxe
and delicious memory, made to last,

indestructible, infinitely so;
where Now is both current, and 'the' current:
Now as in 'right now!', and in riverbeds'
fast-flowing flash floods teeming in torrents;
in this instant, frozen, glacially slow;

or Now as bright chaos, helter-skelter,
Now as innovation, Now as in new,
Now as foundations for stronger structures:
everything, ever depends upon Now;
Now is an oasis, Now means shelter

and battening hatches against the storm
of fateful consequences yesterday;
but Now is also mistress of futures
and wise enough to keep her powder dry
and not think tomorrow always means harm;

and yet Now is so inconsequential,
evanescent and fleeting, here-then-gone,
a mere will-o'-th'-wisp, a nothingness
not a weapon, nor a son-of-a-gun
either, but still something quintessential

betraying a singular relevance:
Now knows its place, succinctly; it is sure
(and most inarguably so, no less)
that in precise purpose alone, it's pure,
aiming for the future, and coherence.

MP 12824

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Martin Peacock

Fri 16th Aug 2024 06:32

Very kind of you to say so, Ray. Me, i'm never certain i've said what i meant to say, so it's always a pleasure to read that i've nailed it. I've been rereading the 'Staying Alive' anthologies, wherein, at the start of every section there's a quote from a poet on the meaning of poetry, how it fits into our lives. I'd be very interested in hearing yours, if you have formulated one.

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raypool

Thu 15th Aug 2024 17:27

A puff of logic - now there is a real poetic line! One thing that intrigues me with poetry is how such dense matter can be contained so concisely to be unravelled. I think with your comment as well as the poem you have amply explained the unexplainable!

Ray

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Martin Peacock

Thu 15th Aug 2024 06:51

Ouch! Ray, you've got it, more or less. We're all prisoners of time, but some are trapped in different wings of the prison (or should that be 'prism'?), in the past or future (pessimists/optimists, analogously.) Everything really depends on something that doesn't exist; and in not-existing, it proves that we don't exist, either. Proof: the past doesn't exist - it has already happened, it is gone, vanished into history; the future doesn't exist either - it is merely potential, an ocean of possibilities waiting to resolve itself in the blinding light of Now; and yet the present doesn't exist either - try to put your finger on this exact instant and you're always too late: it has already become the past in the instant you conceived of the idea. Our brains perceive incoming information too rapidly to codify it straight away so it takes both subconscious and conscious minds appreciable amounts of time to register stimulae; therefore what our senses tell us is already old news by the time we've interpreted it. So, the past doesn't exist; the future doesn't exist; the present doesn't exist; and we being prisoners of time therefore cannot exist either. Ptooff! We vanish in a puff of logic. It's too late to get that coat, my friend: it doesn't exist either. We are all figments of our own imagination.

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raypool

Wed 14th Aug 2024 17:39

I am intrigued Martin. At the end of the poem, with some insight you have revealed the truth of your position I feel. It has a vast and important message that our minds (your representing it) are constantly at loggerheads especially psychologically, always reaching out for answers, and such thinking is like a storm untameable and excoriating . It is almost descending into insanity or at least the ingredients of it. A clever but unrestrained offering and well worth the study!
I'll get my coat......

Ray

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Martin Peacock

Wed 14th Aug 2024 07:30

I'm so grateful to all who've read my poems. My thanks to you.

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