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Wang’s Dīngzihù*

In Wang's Dīngzihù*, the poem explores the unyielding defiance of a man who refuses to let go of his home in the face of relentless urban development. Wang’s small "nail"house becomes a symbol of resistance, standing firm against powerful tycoons and the machinery of progress. As legal battles and societal pressures mount, Wang’s fight is not just for his land, but for his identity and legacy. It deepens the themes of personal pride and resilience, capturing the timeless struggle to protect what truly matters in a changing world.


Upon the hill where shadows fall,
Stands Wang’s small home, defying all.
The tycoons came with gold in hand,
To claim his patch of cherished land.
"Your home is old, its time has passed,
Our towers rise; this won’t outlast."
But Wang stood firm, his voice was clear:
"This house is mine; I’ll keep it here."

 

They brought machines to shake the ground,
Yet still his walls were safe, profound.
He faced the courts, the threats, the might,
And never once gave up the fight.
For Wang, the bricks held more than stone,
They held his past, his dreams, his own.
Against the tide, he made his stand,
A simple man who held his land.

 

The cranes loomed high, the skyline grew,
Yet Wang’s resolve remained in view.
A beacon bright in progress’ wake,
To show the world what pride can take.
Through sleepless nights and days of rain,
He fought with heart, endured the pain.
His neighbors watched, some took his side,
Others left, with nowhere to hide.

 

The law came down, the verdict cold,
But Wang would not be bought or sold.
They promised wealth, a life of ease,
But Wang held tight to his old trees.
No golden coin could sway his heart,
No shining lure could tear apart
The bond he had with earth and sky,
For in his soul, it couldn’t die.

 

They brought the bulldozers, strong and loud,
To raze the past, to join the crowd.
But Wang stood tall, unwavering still,
A man of courage, iron will.
His hands were scarred, his spirit worn,
Yet he refused to be reborn
As just another face in line,
To lose his name, his place, his sign.

 

The towers rose and crowded in,
The world around him spun and spun.
Yet Wang’s small home remained in sight,
A symbol of the ancient fight.
And though the city claimed its space,
It could not touch that sacred place.
For in the hearts of those who knew,
Wang’s stubborn stand would see them through.

 

The cranes loomed high, the skyline grew,
Yet Wang’s resolve remained in view.
A beacon bright in progress’ wake,
To show the world what pride can take.
The world moved on, the years flew fast,
But Wang’s small home still stands at last.
For in his heart, the land lives on—
A legacy that can’t be gone.

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householder who refuses to vacate/give up his home despite pressure from property developers

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Comments

Rolph David

Wed 8th Jan 2025 15:50

Hi Flyntland,

Your words resonate deeply with me, and I want you to know that your efforts are not in vain. It’s clear how much love, care, and vision you’ve poured into transforming your property into a haven for wildlife—a truly remarkable legacy in an increasingly encroached-upon world. The fact that your land now sustains life for Little Owls, Green Woodpeckers, and other creatures is a testament to the power of your stewardship and values.

I can only imagine the heartache of seeing such natural beauty threatened by development. But please know that what you’ve built has meaning far beyond material worth—it’s a beacon of hope in a landscape that often feels dominated by greed and destruction. The lives you’ve touched, both human and animal, are priceless, and that is something no developer can ever take away.

Your resilience and commitment inspire me. If there are ways to rally support—local councils, conservation groups, or even media attention—I urge you to explore them. Sometimes, public awareness can create the protection these spaces need. Above all, I hope you find some solace in knowing that your land is not just a refuge for wildlife but also a reminder of what is possible when people care. It’s a stand for something greater, and I, for one, admire you for it.

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Flyntland

Wed 8th Jan 2025 10:49

I have a huge admiration for Wang - we are not about to lose our home but we are about to be surrounded by new developments despite this being an AONB.

We have been approached by developers who would love our four acres too (no chance)

We have thrown ourselves into what was a rundown property, and now it boasts many appropriate wildlife-friendly trees, including two beautiful thirty-year-old spreading oak trees.

This, previously sterile place, is now home to countless birds - including breeding Little Owls and green Woodpeckers.

We are visited by Buzzards, sparrowhawks, kestrels, Foxes, and Badgers, all of which are of no interest to those whose only thoughts are money and still more money.

We are heartbroken and defeated.

Rolph David

Wed 8th Jan 2025 10:09

Yes, RBK,
They indeed demolished quietly the historic home of two founding members of AC/DC in Sydney which outraged Aussie music fans enormously. The house was the childhood home of the talented musicians Malcolm, Angus and George Young after their family had migrated from Scotland to Sydney in 1963. But it has nothing to do with China's famous nail houses.

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Red Brick Keshner

Tue 7th Jan 2025 23:35

I just heard that property developers only just demolished the house/edifice where AC/DC first recorded/rehearsed, formed and played as a band.

Rolph David

Mon 6th Jan 2025 19:03

Thank you Uilleam,
I am delighted that you like my lines.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 6th Jan 2025 09:26

Thanks Rolph.
A timely, inspiring and well - told morality tale. Integrity Rules OK!

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