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Leaving Room for Errors

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I ask her in the morning if she slept well,

as I almost always do, unless we fought

the night before. Then I am silent.

 

She lays waste to my anger

by offering me a cup of coffee

while we stand together in our back yard

on a mild summer morning.

 

I wonder without speaking,

if a pair of birds splashing in our fountain

might be a gesture of forgiveness too.

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◄ Tomfoolery

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Marla Joy

Thu 16th Jan 2025 23:24

my favorite one so far.

Rolph David

Thu 16th Jan 2025 19:02


Mike,

Your poem is beautifully tender and introspective. The quiet moments you describe—the unspoken reconciliation through coffee, the shared space in the backyard, and the birds in the fountain—feel so real and poignant. It’s a gentle reminder of how forgiveness often resides in small gestures and shared silences. I love how the imagery conveys so much emotion without needing to say it outright.

A lovely, heartfelt piece.

Take care,
Rolph

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