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Egocentricity

Small things irritate us

Big ones we ignore

What is big for me is not for you

For Messier 51 our Sun is just another star.

 

Everyday seems like the last of its kind,

the next will bring in a change.

but it does not, ever

and we keep burning like the sun

 

the wishes never stop, never lessen

the next success always enticing

but never do we reach.

and spend time staring at the moon.

 

The stars don’t ask for names,

The planets need no classifications

Light needs no speedometer

And sound no calibrator.

They all probably know their purpose,

They probably know their place

We

Overthink -

Over aspire -

Overrate –

 - Ourselves and our control over our fates.

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tryingthings

Sun 9th Feb 2025 13:00

Thank you Marla and Rolph! I think, the idea that the macro is depicted/replicated in the micro has really captivated my mind. The cyclic nature of things (set to continue unless the learnings are implemented) is scary at the same time reassuring. It is quite mind bending to even attempt to understand the grand scale!

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Marla Joy

Sat 8th Feb 2025 17:05

Small things irritate us, Big ones we ignore. so true. Marla

Rolph David

Sat 8th Feb 2025 16:32

Dear pallavitryingthings,

The way you juxtapose our trivial irritations with the cosmic scale of existence is powerful, highlighting how small and fleeting our individual concerns are in the grand scheme of things. The recurring theme of overthinking, overaspiring, and overrated self-importance speaks to a universal truth we often overlook. It’s a humbling reminder to step back and consider our place in a much bigger world.
Great job!
Cheerio,
Rolph

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