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Headed Nowhere

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Walking along the trail, the trees teach me

about having no particular place to be.

A peaceful disposition to have, I thought.

 

“We’re not going anywhere.”, they seemed to say.

“But we have many things to do

today in a grateful forest.”

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Mike McPeek

Wed 12th Mar 2025 20:10

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the piece Rolph - much appreciated!

Rolph David

Wed 12th Mar 2025 16:49

Hello Mike,
There’s such gentle wisdom in the way you capture the quiet presence of trees and their way of being. The way you listen to nature and hear its lessons about simply existing without rushing feels both calming and profound. It’s beautiful how you show that even in stillness, there is purpose — “many things to do in a grateful forest” — reminding us that life doesn't have to be hurried to be meaningful. Your lines reflect a deep connection to nature and an ability to find peace and purpose in the present moment, which is something so many of us need to be reminded of. I really like your lines!
Regards,
Rolph

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