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Feelings Have No Age

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Feelings have no age,

feelings have no distance.

With coming years you become a sage,

only real love is your existence.

 

Your body feels more,

your heart beats faster,

your taste is sharper than before,

your soul becomes a master.

 

Feelings have no age,

they become even stronger.

Your love doesn’t live in a cage,

it has no time to ponder.

 

Feelings have no age,

if you love you don’t have to repent.

You have a big revenge,

if your heart and soul are in content.

 

Feelings have no age….

 

Larisa R (Odessa, Ukraine)

love

◄ A Swan-Song

His Majesty Accident ►

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jean lucy thompson

Tue 31st Aug 2010 21:45

Very nice Larisa and very true Most think that when you reach a certain age love and romance flys out the window - not true :)

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 26th Aug 2010 11:53

A strange sequence of ideas, Larisa, interesting certainly. 'Feelings have no age' is a superb premise; but where does the idea of "with age you 'become a sage'" or 'you have a big revenge' fit in? IMO, you have structured your thoughts to fit the rhyme scheme, and they have taken on an artificiality which you didn't intend. Always with respect.

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Mon 23rd Aug 2010 18:00

Thank you, dear Bernadette!

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Bernadette Herbertson

Mon 23rd Aug 2010 13:17

very nice poem larisa lv bernadette x

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