Breathing
It’s as easy as breathing, I say
Taking big, bold, billowing breaths
If you let yourself go
In out, in out
(No nasty innuendo please…)
I could do it on a high wire
A pile of plates on my head
Or jumping off a cliff
Elastic band round my ankle
The endomorphins flow
As I blow, blow, blow
I’m a whale
Snorting the salt
On a clear blue sea
Or a dragon,
Flying high
On my own steam
Breathing
Then I listen to you wheeze
My consumptive child
Painful and laboured
Lungs racked
Or maybe wrecked
Spitting blood
Where I spit fire
I breathe onto the frosted pane
Hoping to see a way through
But the vapour vanishes
And everything’s opaque
Maybe I have a gift
And it’s not so easy
This breathing thing
Val Cook
Thu 9th Sep 2010 20:09
Your composition is excellent Isobel,it identifies and carries through well.But lose that line.
Good work