Biting the Bullet
( A poem for Dave Bradley's challenge)
If only life were a matrix,
the best moments freeze framed,
caught in the film of an eye,
the heat of one touch,
and all the bullets side-stepped
extracted, taken out
plopped like teeth
on a silver salver;
no gas and air
no gaping gum,
just a vacuum
packed
with all the precious time.
In real life the bullets reign,
cold metal comfort
to a busted lip;
home truths roost
like tumours on the tongue
to burst and force their bile.
Bullets bitten are rarely sweet,
swallowed whole,
lie heavy on the soul.
And all the heroes
are un-chosen,
ricocheted through life
in the blinking of an eye,
smaller than life
just flesh and blood
prick and they shall bleed
poison and they shall die.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Sun 5th Sep 2010 10:42
Amazing. Your brain must work constantly, storing fragments of ideas, impressions, relationships etc. until you want to access them for a particular 'thesis'. Your love of language shines through. I also think your intellectual experience with French is a telling factor in your work - the discipline of another language. I loved Latin.